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https://bit.ly/3s2ssIg
Please check i made this website if some experts tell me some improvements on home page design so it will look more professional please look it in laptop i did not mobile optimise it yet

Thank You
 
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I suggest using an image of an even older man so that it looks like you have even more experience.
 
Why link is bit.ly? It wasn't better to share a photo or the direct link of the website and that's it?
 
Your website is taking 12 seconds to load from my end.
 
Loading take some time ( tested it on laptop)
 
please can you pinpoint some design related issues thank you
 
Too slow, go to gtmetrix.com and fix whatever you can, everything is listed.
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- Set title to something that is not My Blog - My WordPress Blog
- domain name and emails are different
- text blocks should be smaller. Use bullet points, smaller chunks of text, easier to read. Nobody will read your walls of text.
- Button for pdf brochure is some 3rd party site.
- Text is too official, salesy, copy-pasting sometimes messed up (well-bein above pdf button, for example). You are not impressing anyone with CEO-speak, "Utilizing products carefully selected to match your specific needs and budget, we offer an extensive range of cutting-edge..." wtf go to ChatGPT and tell him to rewrite text to be understandable for 12 year olds students.
- Theme template is still mixed with some demo content, lorem ipsum and images through the page
- 30 million subscribers?
- Contact forms could be smaller, less fields. You don't need all details at first contact, take them name, email and short message first, later ask for other details.
- Testimonials need real people images, not this fake crap
- Footer is for real estate, lorem ipsum, hello word post, etc. Entire home page is 40% finished. I would put that in "maintenance" mode to prevent google indexing it in this state.
 
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