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For the review, @Blakester wrote a 10,000 word Kindle story in the romance genre. The details of my review are below.

Service Highlights
  • To describe the contents of the e-book, I'd describe it as as erotic romance novel.
I skimmed it for the most part, but it starts off with a build up of sexual tension, the two main characters shag, then there's the morning after regret (e.g., "how could I face him the next morning" or "maybe she didn't enjoy it" type of dialogue), the characters engage in awkward small talk once they see each other again, more sexual tension buildup, they shag again, and the book ends with an orgasm.

  • The e-book is written a bit like a play, and by that I mean it's mostly conversations between characters.
  • The e-book was checked with a premium version of Copyscape and passed.
  • The text that was added to the stock image used for the e-book cover was blended in quite nicely.
  • The image used for the e-book cover cites the photographer at the end of the e-book.
  • Aside from the occasional grammatical error, the English used in the e-book isn't too bad.
What Could Use Improvement
  • As you're encouraged by the seller to use your own pen name and a generic name is used on the e-book cover, it would've been great to receive the PSD file for the e-book cover to cleanly and quickly change the name on the cover. Edit: The seller contacted me and said that they're going to be sure to include the PSD file to their buyers from now on.
Additional Information
  • The e-book was written in US English.
 
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Thank you for the time taken to leave an honest review @Zwielicht
We really liked your suggestion about the PSD file, so from now on we'll include the PSD file too.





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I need an e-book of the epic genre (5,000 words or more). The language must be UK English. Could I look at the samples?
 
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