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Seller delivered 5000 words of content for the review. Turn around time was 11 days.

Content was quite good, very happy with the results. It was good enough for the money site but I think the articles could have been researched a little more.

Good service.
 
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what TAT for 3000 words?
 
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Just received my article and wow, I feel conned.

I paid $50 for this 500-word article, and what I received looked like it was written by my younger sister. (She's 8). Actually, scratch that. She'd do a better job.

I literally paid this guy, or "team of US writers whose native language is English", ten cents every time they pressed the space button, and in exchange, I got an article that had not one, but nine grammatical errors! From the misuse of the construction "an" to the blatant disregard of commas, the article was littered with errors that literally made me want to phone up PayPal and refund that shit. The writer even wrote "overclosking" instead of "overclocking". How fat do your fingers have to be to type that? How blind/intoxicated/incompetent/all of the above does your proofreader, getting paid $10 per 100 words have to be to miss that?

When I raised the issues to the seller, they played it down by telling me that "The total price include not just content writing if you read thread carefully" (Yes, even their reply had errors in) Fair enough, that's true, they would have uploaded the content if I asked, but then so would @ContentWriter or one of the many other writers that charge 15% of the price and do a much better job. So, their whole defense was that I basically shouldn't expect $10/100 word content, because I'm also paying them to upload it and add images.

Asides from the painful-to-read errors, the article was poorly researched, with facts that simply weren't true (Clearly just took this link and didn't check any other sources) Towards the end of the article it seemed as if the writer simply gave up, with some of the paragraphs literally being one sentence long and leaving the reader thinking "what the fuck are they on about". I'm building a site about gaming, so was purposefully vague as to what content I wanted, and this is one of the paragraphs that I got:

Motherboard

If you are not interested with a lot of technical details, you can overlook the motherboard and focus on graphics and the processor, even though it is still very important.

I asked the seller if they have any happy clients from their service, to which they replied "Everyone ;)" and then said this when I asked to see one (As I found it hard to believe anyone with half a brain would be happy with this) "Sorry, but I am not here to discuss my business with other clients, you may read all the reviews on the thread." Well, I must have the eyesight of his proofreader, because I can't find any reviews, positive or negative. This is the sort of run-around behavior that they were giving me.

To make matters worse, they said that our talk was not being constructive. Fair enough. I sent them an in-depth response detailing all the issues I had with the article (Explaining various grammatical errors and how to fix them) and then said something like 'That's 150 words, where do I invoice you for the $15?'.

"If I charge you for time trying to get info from you, you’ll have to file for bankruptcy.
:)" Was the reply I got. What a way to treat someone who just paid you $50 'ey. Nice.

Here are some more amazing examples of what $50 gets you:

It is now possible to just buy an HTC Vive and enjoy your VR games at the comfort of your home. With a powerful gaming PC, you can easily enjoy playing any game around.
'Wait, so do I just need to buy just the VIVE or do I need a PC as well?' Is what I, and the other people I showed the article to, were wondering when we read that.

In conclusion, in order to enjoy gaming on your PC, this article has outlined what you need in order to make sure that your PC is ready, whether you are doing the building yourself or buying pre-built ones.
What benefit does this offer to the reader? None.

Power Consumption and Noise

It is important to know that the more you overclock your PC, the more the power it consumes and the louder it becomes.
And it goes on like this for 500 words.

The advantage of buying a pre-built gaming PC ins that all of the overclosking has been tasted and covered by warranty. Longer warranty periods are bette
Another 10/10 sentence here. Very informative. I can see my readers sticking around for the rest of the article after reading this. Great that is had been tasted. Was it sweet or savoury?

Overall, for the price, I would recommend that you run for the hills! To be honest, this wouldn't make it past my PBN's. Just to put how bad the article was into context, I just wrote a 900-word review for it. Something that would have cost me $90 if I ordered it here.

BUT WAIT. They would upload it to WP for me! What a bargain right.

@se900se May I suggest that you get your "writers" to read these articles?

Include vs Includes
Commas After Introductory Phrases
Compound Words: When to Hyphenate
How to install Grammarly
Grammar101

If anyone would like to read the full, unedited article, send me a PM and I'll link you.
 
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Just received my article and wow, I feel conned.

I paid $50 for this 500-word article, and what I received looked like it was written by my younger sister. (She's 8). Actually, scratch that. She'd do a better job.

I literally paid this guy, or "team of US writers whose native language is English", ten cents every time they pressed the space button, and in exchange, I got an article that had not one, but nine grammatical errors! From the misuse of the construction "an" to the blatant disregard of commas, the article was littered with errors that literally made me want to phone up PayPal and refund that shit. The writer even wrote "overclosking" instead of "overclocking". How fat do your fingers have to be to type that? How blind/intoxicated/incompetent/all of the above does your proofreader, getting paid $10 per 100 words have to be to miss that?

When I raised the issues to the seller, they played it down by telling me that "The total price include not just content writing if you read thread carefully" (Yes, even their reply had errors in) Fair enough, that's true, they would have uploaded the content if I asked, but then so would @ContentWriter or one of the many other writers that charge 15% of the price and do a much better job. So, their whole defense was that I basically shouldn't expect $10/100 word content, because I'm also paying them to upload it and add images.

Asides from the painful-to-read errors, the article was poorly researched, with facts that simply weren't true (Clearly just took this link and didn't check any other sources) Towards the end of the article it seemed as if the writer simply gave up, with some of the paragraphs literally being one sentence long and leaving the reader thinking "what the fuck are they on about". I'm building a site about gaming, so was purposefully vague as to what content I wanted, and this is one of the paragraphs that I got:



I asked the seller if they have any happy clients from their service, to which they replied "Everyone ;)" and then said this when I asked to see one (As I found it hard to believe anyone with half a brain would be happy with this) "Sorry, but I am not here to discuss my business with other clients, you may read all the reviews on the thread." Well, I must have the eyesight of his proofreader, because I can't find any reviews, positive or negative. This is the sort of run-around behavior that they were giving me.

To make matters worse, they said that our talk was not being constructive. Fair enough. I sent them an in-depth response detailing all the issues I had with the article (Explaining various grammatical errors and how to fix them) and then said something like 'That's 150 words, where do I invoice you for the $15?'.

"If I charge you for time trying to get info from you, you’ll have to file for bankruptcy.
:)" Was the reply I got. What a way to treat someone who just paid you $50 'ey. Nice.

Here are some more amazing examples of what $50 gets you:

'Wait, so do I just need to buy just the VIVE or do I need a PC as well?' Is what I, and the other people I showed the article to, were wondering when we read that.

What benefit does this offer to the reader? None.

And it goes on like this for 500 words.

Another 10/10 sentence here. Very informative. I can see my readers sticking around for the rest of the article after reading this. Great that is had been tasted. Was it sweet or savoury?

Overall, for the price, I would recommend that you run for the hills! To be honest, this wouldn't make it past my PBN's. Just to put how bad the article was into context, I just wrote a 900-word review for it. Something that would have cost me $90 if I ordered it here.

BUT WAIT. They would upload it to WP for me! What a bargain right.

@se900se May I suggest that you get your "writers" to read these articles?

Include vs Includes
Commas After Introductory Phrases
Compound Words: When to Hyphenate
How to install Grammarly
Grammar101

If anyone would like to read the full, unedited article, send me a PM and I'll link you.

Was interested in this until I saw this amazing review haha! I remember there was a comment on this thread where someone pointed out that there many errors in their sales thread but now its deleted haha.

Please send me the link to the article mate, I would love to read the 50$ article XD
 
Was interested in this until I saw this amazing review haha! I remember there was a comment on this thread where someone pointed out that there many errors in their sales thread but now its deleted haha.

Please send me the link to the article mate, I would love to read the 50$ article XD
That's why BHW is a great forum. Instead of paying for this article, realizing that's it's bad and just forgetting about it, so others will pay for it too and then in the end feel like they've been ripped off, our boy @hasa1015 did all of us a favor, by writing this great review about OPs BST. Max respect Harry !
 
Just received my article and wow, I feel conned.

Thanks for your review Harry.
@hasa1015 Placed an order for provided topic consisting of two words, on the request to provide more details he only gave 'general, descriptive article.' He received exactly what he ordered, article was 250 words longer. It did have minor mistakes, but that's what revisions are for.

After Harry said he's not happy he was offered revisions multiple times but he failed to provide what he exactly is not happy about, instead he chose to act unprofessionally using offensive language.

He was assured that he will be happy, but instead of talking and cooperation @hasa1015 decided to act like his above mentioned sister and leave a bad review. Sorry for your disappointment, Harry.
 
I was really happy with my article’s performance. The writing quality is something I don’t care about in this situation. I’ve seen the complaints about the grammar, and that’s understandable. However, if you read and understand what this service is for, it’s to boost SEO, and it has done this job for me beautifully.

If you want just consistently great writing, maybe look elsewhere, but it's as simple as asking for a few revisions or being specific in terms of what you want. I asked for some revisions and they got done with no problem. In terms of the return on investment for an optimized article this has gone beyond my expectations. I have seen a big jump in profit using this article for a traffic arbitrage campaign compared to the other ones that I was using before.
 
I was really happy with my article’s performance. The writing quality is something I don’t care about in this situation. I’ve seen the complaints about the grammar, and that’s understandable. However, if you read and understand what this service is for, it’s to boost SEO, and it has done this job for me beautifully.

If you want just consistently great writing, maybe look elsewhere, but it's as simple as asking for a few revisions or being specific in terms of what you want. I asked for some revisions and they got done with no problem. In terms of the return on investment for an optimized article, this has gone beyond my expectations. I have seen a big jump in profit using this article for a traffic arbitrage campaign compared to the other ones that I was using before.

Thanks for an awesome review!
We are giving another 2 Review Copies with 10% discount!
 
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