Hey Guys! - What do you about this? NSFW

[IamNRE]

This was our attempt at making a viral video.

Let us know what you think

Please like and share if you don't mind!!! Our name on FB is Money Site Content <3

 

[PandaDomo]

Totally over-used, but completely describes it...

 

[dheer]

 

[IamNRE]

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Totally over-used, but completely describes it...

Haha - Thanks I found myself stripping along with her the first time I watched the video....she just captures your full attention

@dheer

Not sure what you are saying? Are you saving up for an apple?

 

[Panther28]

Yeah thats pretty good, the problem is that near the end of the video, she still has 2 items of clothing on, is there anyway around this?

 

[Tony Barns]

It's all about TNA and I don't see much T and any A sorry.

 

[MachineLord]

Fiverr FTW! lol

 

[Rotem Guez]

Add some music to it man

 

[Jonny Quick]

A little rough. Good idea, but a little rough. Too much noise on the audio. Also the business attire to bikini transition doesn't work in an office environment. It would have been better if she went to bra & panties. The classy, Victoria Secret kind. Black lace.

She's got most of the acting she needs, except the negligent tossing of the top was off. Not right. She's more in the genre of the hot blonde dominatrix vs. the hot beach bunny, so that gesture was also not exactly right. The top comes off deliberately and gets tossed away with deliberation and not negligently.

The hair also needs to transition, from severe and business bun to down. That's a big deal for men. The hair has to start off up, and then come down. A few extra seconds and a few more words won't make much difference in terms of length.

The blouse was also wrong. Too "poofy", and no sharp lines in it where there should be. And the buttons take too long. Snaps, one at a time, and fast, would be better. The camera was too high. It makes her seem small, when the opposite effect is desired. Her gaze should be slightly downward to the camera. And no need to point at the "you". It's a pseudo porn movie. There's only one man in her whole universe, so there's no need to point at him.

Also, she needs to take control of her voice more. She's either in charge, or she's not. (I say she is.) There's no soft little girl in this thing at all. And the slap on the ass well I'm 50/50 as far as if I think it should stay. It's a good sound, makes the hot chick seem more real (SLAP!), but again doesn't really fit.

Finally, and most importantly you have to have the URL of the business superimposed as a graphic.

 

[steelballs]

And in part 2 off come the pants...

 

[Techxan]

You want to go viral, you should have had her slip on a pair of handcuffs at the end, attach herself to a clip on the wall, look at her derriere and say" "It ain't gonna slap itself!".

It will go viral because all the feminists will have a shit

 

[Tony Barns]

If you want to make a viral video have charlie bite your finger!

 

[IamNRE]

Yeah thats pretty good, the problem is that near the end of the video, she still has 2 items of clothing on, is there anyway around this?

I have to spread some rep. around .... Thanks for the share!

Yeah... that is the point. It has to stop leaving the viewer wanting more

It's all about TNA and I don't see much T and any A sorry.

Sorry, Are you talking about Wrestling ?? What is TNA - total none action wrestling ??

Fiverr FTW! lol

He knows ^^!

Add some music to it man

Oh... music could set the tone....either in a good way or bad. I could not think of a track to add, any suggestion.

 

[IamNRE]

A little rough. Good idea, but a little rough. Too much noise on the audio. Also the business attire to bikini transition doesn't work in an office environment. It would have been better if she went to bra & panties. The classy, Victoria Secret kind. Black lace.

She's got most of the acting she needs, except the negligent tossing of the top was off. Not right. She's more in the genre of the hot blonde dominatrix vs. the hot beach bunny, so that gesture was also not exactly right. The top comes off deliberately and gets tossed away with deliberation and not negligently.

The hair also needs to transition, from severe and business bun to down. That's a big deal for men. The hair has to start off up, and then come down. A few extra seconds and a few more words won't make much difference in terms of length.

The blouse was also wrong. Too "poofy", and no sharp lines in it where there should be. And the buttons take too long. Snaps, one at a time, and fast, would be better. The camera was too high. It makes her seem small, when the opposite effect is desired. Her gaze should be slightly downward to the camera. And no need to point at the "you". It's a pseudo porn movie. There's only one man in her whole universe, so there's no need to point at him.

Also, she needs to take control of her voice more. She's either in charge, or she's not. (I say she is.) There's no soft little girl in this thing at all. And the slap on the ass well I'm 50/50 as far as if I think it should stay. It's a good sound, makes the hot chick seem more real (SLAP!), but again doesn't really fit.

Finally, and most importantly you have to have the URL of the business superimposed as a graphic.

Wow - did you major in film/ads in college or something

Thanks for your thoughts & attention to detail. We will Def. look into that if we decide to make another one of these .

 

[2011nfl]

Sorry, Are you talking about Wrestling ?? What is TNA - total none action wrestling ??

Titties
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Ass

 

[Dan Da Man]

I saw this chick on fivverr. Honestly, this is a pretty stupid video. I wouldn't buy from you nor is this ever going to go viral. Why would anyone share this?

"Hey loook, a girl talking about content and she takes off her top and is wearing a bikini! " It would have been better if it was some fat dude with big tits IMHO.

No one would EVER share this video EVER!

BTW, I don't mean any disrespect but I think you could do much better then paying a chick off fivver hoping a video would go viral.

 

[IamNRE]

And in part 2 off come the pants...

You already know it, Pete. I'm going to have people give their name and email though for that privilege

jk

If you want to make a viral video have charlie bite your finger!

Yeah.... not sure that would work.... hot sexy babe in bikini + lil kid biting her finger.

You want to go viral, you should have had her slip on a pair of handcuffs at the end, attach herself to a clip on the wall, look at her derriere and say" "It ain't gonna slap itself!".

It will go viral because all the feminists will have a shit

You are right, they'd be all over this one. Calling us sexist and what not, I can just imagine.

 

[Panther28]

I bet she was feeling red hot horny after that slap, that was a hard one.

 

[IamNRE]

Titties
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Ass

Makes sense.

It's a youtube video... the video would be taken down if there was TOO much TNA

I saw this chick on fivverr. Honestly, this is a pretty stupid video. I wouldn't buy from you nor is this ever going to go viral. Why would anyone share this?

"Hey loook, a girl talking about content and she takes off her top and is wearing a bikini! " It would have been better if it was some fat dude with big tits IMHO.

No one would EVER share this video EVER!

BTW, I don't mean any disrespect but I think you could do much better then paying a chick off fivver hoping a video would go viral.

 

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That's too funny Need better cam/mic Doesn't look professional enough without it