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Discussion in 'Web Design' started by MyDymo, Feb 9, 2010.

  1. MyDymo

    MyDymo Junior Member

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    Dear BHW members,

    I have gotten addicted to CPA. I designed a website for another one of my CPA niches. It will get heavy traffic.. especially via FAcebook (Group has 300k members).

    Users type in there email, name and click submit :) i get paid.. I uploaded a test page.. let me know what you think

    My Site
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  2. gonigkum

    gonigkum Registered Member

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    Everything is fine , but it takes a little bit long till it loads ...
     
  3. elmbrent

    elmbrent Newbie

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    Jesus you design is awful!
     
  4. rudeprincess

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    Design is real bright, but perfect for an itunes offer. Good job. It is slow loading though. How long you been using hostmywarez? I have been looking for offshore hosting.
     
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    I don't think that kids trying to get free music for their iPods are going to have a problem with that design. It is actually quite attractive.
     
  6. MyDymo

    MyDymo Junior Member

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    Thanks for the criticism. As rudeprincess said.. its itunes so it has to be bright ... Yeah I really dont know why it takes long to load.

    @rudeprincess
    iv been using HostMyWarez for around 2 weeks now, everything is alright. Prices are good. But they do have some downtime and sometimes sites are slow for some reason :( but at least its offshore i guess.
     
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    Good landing page...pages for gift cards needs to be attractive...If it takes time to load....you might loose some good leads...Try and use CSS and lower the resolution of the image..That might help you..

    BTW how do you driev traffic to this page??
     
  8. MyDymo

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    @nixnash
    Im driving traffic to my site via facebook & email marketing... I dont know any css only photoshop and Web Page maker lol :(

    Im hosting 3 sites on the same server.. maybe thats what is slowing me down? :(
     
  9. tanay46

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    It's designed quite well, keeping the niche in mind. Though as others have said, the pages takes quite long to load. Maybe try to optimize the image used a bit more.
     
  10. MyDymo

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    Thanks Tanay :) Will try slicing the images :).... any more?
     
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    Background is too busy. It takes away focus from the offer. Tone down the splatters. Why are you only using the right half of the canvas? Also, Kaspersky blocked your affiliate link. I can't see any sign up form.
     
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    Thanks JNick. Iv TOned down the quality so it loads faster.. But i cant find any other bkg that goes with the rest of the Site. and I havnt finished the site il add some text to the left side when i think of something lol
     
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    is there any real money on with those email submits still? I used to do it 4 years ago... can you give us some numbers you or others polling from this method?
    Thanks.
     
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    I think it looks perfect for this kind of offer...great job! ;)
     
  15. MyDymo

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    Yes there still is cash.. but Im generating very slowly and badly because im making NO EFFORT what so ever to promote or bring traffic. its all about getting the new offers that are high paying. Heres some Results so far for a JV im doing with Viral guy (based on the itunes cpa thing)

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  16. ElectroMan

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    How many leads are you planning to run through that iframe of PWP?
     
  17. MyDymo

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    Not really planned that far ahead,, but the offer is becoming dead.. went from $2.00 per email to $1.50 and i think im getting shaved.. time to change :(
     
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    I would put that 250k back%20TOP.png image and convert into a jpg in Photoshop at 50% quality which will get it down to 100k. Still a lot but better than before.
     
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    You need to tone it down still a bit (Try reducing the vibrancy of the bg). I "get" that its Itunes and all but still to bright. Also I wouldn't double up the radial seals on the top of the page. Just looks to cluttered and you lose the effectiveness of 1 seal.
     
  20. iq465

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    I felt the searing pain of Jesus as he pulled back my eyeball skins with a ferociousness yet unmatched....

    I'd tone it down a bit. Good LP for young teens tho if thats what you're going for.