Thank you for your detailed reply, I appreciate it.
Yes you are right about that. Mine does look the same as others, typical thumbnail and so on. But since no one else has a video for it (the game is newly released), it should work. There's heaps of videos for the previous game, but not the new one, I'm the only one with an APK for it.
(well, not a real .apk, but still)
I guess I need to change some stuff. My LP is alright, with comments under the unlock and so on to make it more believable that it works. Might do some changes there too. I've done different LPs to split test. When you say
"it's very convincing that the unlocking actually is giving something", how do you do that?
I should look into other things instead of APKs maybe. I was thinking of combining this with eCommerce, but we will see how it goes. Might work with one of my sites.
So your niche is not in the game app niche? And if you don't mind me asking, how are your videos? Instructional, graphic, whiteboard etc?