Your feedback on character design

Quilst

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Dec 1, 2009

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• Mar 31, 2016

• #1

Hello,

I have created this character for practice purpose only and I would like your feedback and honest critics.

Since it took a while to make this due the lack of proper equipment. I am still learning here.

Any feedback would be nice as long as you don't troll the thread.

Here is the image:


Thank you for your time

 

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Deleted member 755860

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• Mar 31, 2016

• #2

good job I think it depends on your audience, I like medieval characters

 

randybishop

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• #3

Looks good!
What are you using it for?

 

Headmaster Cid

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• #4

Thats pretty nice. But why does she have a penis?

 

Quilst

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• #5

Visit said:

good job I think it depends on your audience, I like medieval characters

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I was going for a bit cartoon style cute girl - I wouldn't know what my target audience would be in this case

Thanks

randybishop said:

Looks good!
What are you using it for?

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Thanks, there is no purpose for this image - just a practice doodle

fostdecile said:

Thats pretty nice. But why does she have a penis?

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It's a very large vagina

 

living2xl

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It's a waste. It just look like designed by a young child or an initial designer.
You have to work hard for getting good results.

 

vitarank

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• #7

It doesnt appeal to me that much but that sure is a pretty good start.

 

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Cha Wong

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• #8

What software did you use to make it?

 

ChanzGrande

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• Apr 5, 2016

• #9

You need to invest in camel-toe experience in my opinion. This character is excellent except for her rather large package. Just carve in a simple thin line, and everyone will be like, "Damn, that cartoon is FINEEEEE!"

I still think she rates even with the penis, just not as highly.

 

magnus99

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• Apr 7, 2016

• #10

Very nice man, keep practicing!

 

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Ninjaseotools

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• #11

great work buddy ...keep it up

 

Adamsss

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• #12

It's nice for start. And you need some more practice obviousely. Keep up!

 

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Idicam

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• Apr 7, 2016

• #13

Looks good add some background effects

 

snowboardnj

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• Apr 8, 2016

• #14

She looks great!

 

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defomy

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• #15

looks good..
fat vajayjay..

 

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superpink

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• Apr 11, 2016

• #16

The face and the eye look kinda weird . The over all look not normal . The color is also kinda very hard to match for most website . oh yeh the hair look weird also .
You have the skill already i am sure youc an improve .

 

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skoka222

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Apr 17, 2016

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• Apr 17, 2016

• #17

Yeah the face is really weird and the curves??!?? 6/10

 

Quilst

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• #18

Thank you all for the feedback. I know it's not gaming industry quality. Still learning here.

Hope to improve on my next design

And for the software I was using: Flash MX for initial drawing than painted over in photoshop.


It would be much easier if I had a tablet to work with - this piece is all mouse work.

Cheers

 

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Tom Hopkins

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Jun 25, 2015

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• Apr 20, 2016

• #19

It's good for a start, the face looks slightly distorted towards the bottom. Moomin like?

What's it intended to be used for?