Your feedback on character design

[Quilst]

Hello,

I have created this character for practice purpose only and I would like your feedback and honest critics.

Since it took a while to make this due the lack of proper equipment. I am still learning here.

Any feedback would be nice as long as you don't troll the thread.

Here is the image:


Thank you for your time

 

[Deleted member 755860]

good job I think it depends on your audience, I like medieval characters

 

[randybishop]

Looks good!
What are you using it for?

 

[Headmaster Cid]

Thats pretty nice. But why does she have a penis?

 

[Quilst]

good job I think it depends on your audience, I like medieval characters

I was going for a bit cartoon style cute girl - I wouldn't know what my target audience would be in this case

Thanks

Looks good!
What are you using it for?

Thanks, there is no purpose for this image - just a practice doodle

Thats pretty nice. But why does she have a penis?

It's a very large vagina

 

[living2xl]

It's a waste. It just look like designed by a young child or an initial designer.
You have to work hard for getting good results.

 

[vitarank]

It doesnt appeal to me that much but that sure is a pretty good start.

 

[Cha Wong]

What software did you use to make it?

 

[ChanzGrande]

You need to invest in camel-toe experience in my opinion. This character is excellent except for her rather large package. Just carve in a simple thin line, and everyone will be like, "Damn, that cartoon is FINEEEEE!"

I still think she rates even with the penis, just not as highly.

 

[magnus99]

Very nice man, keep practicing!

 

[Ninjaseotools]

great work buddy ...keep it up

 

[Adamsss]

It's nice for start. And you need some more practice obviousely. Keep up!

 

[Idicam]

Looks good add some background effects

 

[snowboardnj]

She looks great!

 

[defomy]

looks good..
fat vajayjay..

 

[superpink]

The face and the eye look kinda weird . The over all look not normal . The color is also kinda very hard to match for most website . oh yeh the hair look weird also .
You have the skill already i am sure youc an improve .

 

[skoka222]

Yeah the face is really weird and the curves??!?? 6/10

 

[Quilst]

Thank you all for the feedback. I know it's not gaming industry quality. Still learning here.

Hope to improve on my next design

And for the software I was using: Flash MX for initial drawing than painted over in photoshop.


It would be much easier if I had a tablet to work with - this piece is all mouse work.

Cheers

 

[Tom Hopkins]

It's good for a start, the face looks slightly distorted towards the bottom. Moomin like?

What's it intended to be used for?