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Your feedback on character design

Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by Quilst, Mar 31, 2016.

  1. Quilst

    Quilst Registered Member

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    Hello,

    I have created this character for practice purpose only and I would like your feedback and honest critics.

    Since it took a while to make this due the lack of proper equipment. I am still learning here.

    Any feedback would be nice as long as you don't troll the thread.

    Here is the image:
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    Thank you for your time
     
  2. Visit

    Visit Senior Member

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    good job I think it depends on your audience, I like medieval characters
     
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    Looks good!
    What are you using it for?
     
  4. fostdecile

    fostdecile Junior Member

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    Thats pretty nice. But why does she have a penis?
     
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  5. Quilst

    Quilst Registered Member

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    I was going for a bit cartoon style cute girl - I wouldn't know what my target audience would be in this case :)

    Thanks

    Thanks, there is no purpose for this image - just a practice doodle

    It's a very large vagina :D
     
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    living2xl Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    It's a waste. It just look like designed by a young child or an initial designer.
    You have to work hard for getting good results.
     
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    It doesnt appeal to me that much but that sure is a pretty good start.
     
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  8. Cha Wong

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    What software did you use to make it?
     
  9. ChanzGrande

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    You need to invest in camel-toe experience in my opinion. This character is excellent except for her rather large package. Just carve in a simple thin line, and everyone will be like, "Damn, that cartoon is FINEEEEE!"

    I still think she rates even with the penis, just not as highly.
     
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  10. magnus99

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    Very nice man, keep practicing!
     
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    Ninjaseotools Junior Member

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    great work buddy ...keep it up
     
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  12. Adamsss

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    It's nice for start. And you need some more practice obviousely. Keep up!
     
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  13. Idicam

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    Looks good add some background effects
     
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    She looks great!
     
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    looks good..
    fat vajayjay.. :p
     
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    The face and the eye look kinda weird . The over all look not normal . The color is also kinda very hard to match for most website . oh yeh the hair look weird also .
    You have the skill already i am sure youc an improve .
     
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  17. skoka222

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    Yeah the face is really weird and the curves??!?? 6/10
     
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  18. Quilst

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    Thank you all for the feedback. I know it's not gaming industry quality. Still learning here.

    Hope to improve on my next design

    And for the software I was using: Flash MX for initial drawing than painted over in photoshop.


    It would be much easier if I had a tablet to work with - this piece is all mouse work.

    Cheers
     
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    It's good for a start, the face looks slightly distorted towards the bottom. Moomin like?

    What's it intended to be used for?