Review my squeeze page please

rockme12

rockme12

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Hi, I recently finished making my squeeze page and drove traffic from someone here on BHW. Not gonna mention their name and get attacked for promoting. Anyway I do not want to give out the name to the public. Anyway, I need some people to review my site please. BTW so far I havent got any opt ins. I do double opt in for quality purposes.
 
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​Shot you a pm. Thank you
 
I'll take a look. I don't have much experience making squeeze pages but as a consumer, I can recognize a real product from a fake one just from the squeeze page.
 
Shoot me p.m. with site. I send you some checklist for LP and recommendations from me.
 
Sent all of you some pm's. Thanks
 
I think it's a good download page for an ebook. The cover design is excellent, clearly well made. Coloration is nice, and it has a nice flow to it. One option is put the contents of the ebook in a sort of checklist, to draw the attention of the visitor. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the spacing for that section. For example, the '6 pack' goes into the margin where no other words go. Consistent margins are important, I think. Anyway, it looks good! If I was fat maybe I'd be your first download!
 
JilliGlaspol12 said:
I think it's a good download page for an ebook. The cover design is excellent, clearly well made. Coloration is nice, and it has a nice flow to it. One option is put the contents of the ebook in a sort of checklist, to draw the attention of the visitor. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the spacing for that section. For example, the '6 pack' goes into the margin where no other words go. Consistent margins are important, I think. Anyway, it looks good! If I was fat maybe I'd be your first download!
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Thanks for the review. I found it hard to put bullet points because I changed the position of the ebook image. Working on it.

Once again, thanks for the review.
 
Guys. Got the page already reviewed.

Thanks to those who helped and those who planned on.
 
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