Review my squeeze page please

[rockme12]

Hi, I recently finished making my squeeze page and drove traffic from someone here on BHW. Not gonna mention their name and get attacked for promoting. Anyway I do not want to give out the name to the public. Anyway, I need some people to review my site please. BTW so far I havent got any opt ins. I do double opt in for quality purposes.

 

[Liaata]

Sure, send me a pm

 

[rockme12]

​Shot you a pm. Thank you

 

[JilliGlaspol12]

I'll take a look. I don't have much experience making squeeze pages but as a consumer, I can recognize a real product from a fake one just from the squeeze page.

 

[ivo1017]

Shoot me p.m. with site. I send you some checklist for LP and recommendations from me.

 

[arousso]

I'll do it, please send PM

 

[rockme12]

Sent all of you some pm's. Thanks

 

[SEOtheWorld]

Send me a PM, I'll check it out

 

[Dumper]

I'll check it out for you as well...

 

[JilliGlaspol12]

I think it's a good download page for an ebook. The cover design is excellent, clearly well made. Coloration is nice, and it has a nice flow to it. One option is put the contents of the ebook in a sort of checklist, to draw the attention of the visitor. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the spacing for that section. For example, the '6 pack' goes into the margin where no other words go. Consistent margins are important, I think. Anyway, it looks good! If I was fat maybe I'd be your first download!

 

[rockme12]

I think it's a good download page for an ebook. The cover design is excellent, clearly well made. Coloration is nice, and it has a nice flow to it. One option is put the contents of the ebook in a sort of checklist, to draw the attention of the visitor. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the spacing for that section. For example, the '6 pack' goes into the margin where no other words go. Consistent margins are important, I think. Anyway, it looks good! If I was fat maybe I'd be your first download!

Thanks for the review. I found it hard to put bullet points because I changed the position of the ebook image. Working on it.

Once again, thanks for the review.

 

[bwman]

you can pm me as well

 

[rockme12]

Guys. Got the page already reviewed.

Thanks to those who helped and those who planned on.

 

[s3v007]

I can take a look.