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Review my squeeze page please

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by rockme12, Dec 21, 2012.

  1. rockme12

    rockme12 Regular Member

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    Hi, I recently finished making my squeeze page and drove traffic from someone here on BHW. Not gonna mention their name and get attacked for promoting. Anyway I do not want to give out the name to the public. Anyway, I need some people to review my site please. BTW so far I havent got any opt ins. I do double opt in for quality purposes.
     
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  3. rockme12

    rockme12 Regular Member

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    ​Shot you a pm. Thank you
     
  4. JilliGlaspol12

    JilliGlaspol12 Newbie

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    I'll take a look. I don't have much experience making squeeze pages but as a consumer, I can recognize a real product from a fake one just from the squeeze page.
     
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    Shoot me p.m. with site. I send you some checklist for LP and recommendations from me.
     
  6. arousso

    arousso Registered Member

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    I'll do it, please send PM
     
  7. rockme12

    rockme12 Regular Member

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    Sent all of you some pm's. Thanks
     
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    Send me a PM, I'll check it out
     
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    I'll check it out for you as well...
     
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    JilliGlaspol12 Newbie

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    I think it's a good download page for an ebook. The cover design is excellent, clearly well made. Coloration is nice, and it has a nice flow to it. One option is put the contents of the ebook in a sort of checklist, to draw the attention of the visitor. Also, I'm not a huge fan of the spacing for that section. For example, the '6 pack' goes into the margin where no other words go. Consistent margins are important, I think. Anyway, it looks good! If I was fat maybe I'd be your first download!
     
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  11. rockme12

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    Thanks for the review. I found it hard to put bullet points because I changed the position of the ebook image. Working on it.

    Once again, thanks for the review.
     
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    you can pm me as well
     
  13. rockme12

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    Guys. Got the page already reviewed.

    Thanks to those who helped and those who planned on.
     
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    I can take a look.