Review my site, please.

Vekkata said:
Guys, is it possible your browsers to block my animated presentation ? http://gyazo.com/d41cdb6eb3db7fe676e5aef4b4574cb1
I didn't know it load slow, hm. I'll work on that, thank you !
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Probably. I always run an ad blocker.
 
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You need a better logo for starters. Sorry but in my opinion a lot needs to be done. I guess I am just a perfectionist. I could write 1000 words on what to improve. However, it is passable. At the very least improve the site structure. The three links in the navigation are way too vague like someone said above.
 
Site looks good, but the logo is not as much creative.. I can give you 2 concepts of logo at free of cost! If interested then PM back.. Cheers! :drinking2
 
There's too much competition for my attention - I have no idea where I should look, and as a result, I closed it after about 6 seconds.

EDIT: PS - strictly a design comment, not intended to be derogatory in any way :)
 
I like the writing a lot. You can work on the categories a little more like others have mentioned. Are you planning on writing a whole encyclopedia something by yourself
 
Breakk82 said:
I like the writing a lot. You can work on the categories a little more like others have mentioned. Are you planning on writing a whole encyclopedia something by yourself
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Yes, I plan doing this, also some health tips and news. I will writing at least 5 - 10 articles every day. If I have more time - more. Can't work on categories, because I just don't have enough articles, but in future they will be a lot more.

Cheers !
 
Definately change the logo by taking off the drop shadow and using a cleaner font. The site design is alright but a little confusing at times. The articles contain good and long content but lacks categories.
 
Well, what i think is you should use same size of images for all posts which show as featured image. I thik after that your page looks good - like your Home and Family page not have all same size of images which may not attract more eyes. I think so.


I hope that helps.


Regards
 
I think you need to improve a lot in terms of ranking, links, and loading speed. Site has not opened in my system.
 
bloggersjoy said:
I think you need to improve a lot in terms of ranking, links, and loading speed. Site has not opened in my system.
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Yes, it's new site, i'm working on the design at the moment. The loading speed bother me a lot, I'm still fighting with W3 Total Cache plugin. The setup is hard for me. I found some " the best w3TC setups " but everyone is offering different way of setup. I don't judge those people, because everyone have different site with different needs. So I'm still trying to setup it for my needs. I think I'm ready with design part, I don't see what else I can do to make it look better. Any ideas ?

Cheers !
 
I have checked out the site. It looks great and everything looks well placed.
 
The site looks like the beginning of a good project. Good job.

I can, however, slightly criticize the design, but that's just my perspective. That's because I'm into minimalistic themes and maximum simplicity. The homepage looks professional and well designed, but that design is not spread throughout the rest of the site. As I said, that's just me. :)

I see you've already monetized the site with ads. Do you have any revenue yet?
 
This site is 2 weeks old, it's too early for traffic and revenue :)
 
I think the articles are too bland. In the question and answers parts there are no gaps (generally) and it all ends up as looking like just one long article. There is no bolding of headings to indicate a question or an answer that someone can find quickly. Some do have a Green Q or an A and some don't. The right hand side bar with information about the same problem is awful. Why would I look in 2 places on the same page.

I also think that quite a bit of the grammar is wrong and to be seen as an authority site it needs to be proof read and tidied up. There are far too many commas when they are not needed.

Hope that helps a little
 
Vekkata said:
This site is 2 weeks old, it's too early for traffic and revenue :)
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Yeah, maybe. But since you have the ads on I thought you'd have some data. Especially if you drive traffic to it with pinterest.
islandman1010 said:
I think the articles are too bland. In the question and answers parts there are no gaps (generally) and it all ends up as looking like just one long article. There is no bolding of headings to indicate a question or an answer that someone can find quickly. Some do have a Green Q or an A and some don't. The right hand side bar with information about the same problem is awful. Why would I look in 2 places on the same page.

I also think that quite a bit of the grammar is wrong and to be seen as an authority site it needs to be proof read and tidied up. There are far too many commas when they are not needed.

Hope that helps a little
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On the contrary. I think the articles are too good. Some of them even have transcriptions of the pronunciations and are sorted by first letter. I think I might get where they come from - they look like ripped from an encyclopedia, journal or something like that.
Some of the words have a very high CPC and SEO/ad competition so it looks like putting articles in for the sake of monetizing them with traffic that is not SEO traffic. They don't seem to be indexed anywhere else - they look unique, so it might be a good idea, it just might be.
 
islandman1010 said:
I think the articles are too bland. In the question and answers parts there are no gaps (generally) and it all ends up as looking like just one long article. There is no bolding of headings to indicate a question or an answer that someone can find quickly. Some do have a Green Q or an A and some don't. The right hand side bar with information about the same problem is awful. Why would I look in 2 places on the same page.

I also think that quite a bit of the grammar is wrong and to be seen as an authority site it needs to be proof read and tidied up. There are far too many commas when they are not needed.

Hope that helps a little
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Are you sure the grammar is bad ? :O This is impossible.
About the quotes, they are from wikipedia, those quotes are related to the topic, I keep the external links, because they point to authority site and I want to credit wikipedia, so I don't have problem because of the copy-pasted content.
 
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