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Please Review my newly created Squidoo Lens.....

Discussion in 'Black Hat SEO' started by tabish8612, Dec 5, 2009.

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  1. tabish8612

    tabish8612 Power Member

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    Here are the link of my new created squidoo lens about solar energy:
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    http://www.squidoo.com/build-solar-energy
    Please tell me how good it is optimized in term of SEO... It is not currently index in google I just ping it nothing else...
     
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    You need 3+ modules.
     
  3. Jacquita

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    Nice looking lens. You should cloak your clickbank. Description is far too long 1200+ characters. I believe Google only shows the first 120. So cut it down. Use your keywords in the description. Bold or italic keywords in description. Only 4 keywords, use more keywords with less competition.

    Other than that, your lens looks great. Just modify your description and keywords.
     
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  4. tabish8612

    tabish8612 Power Member

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    How to get rid of inline ads in my squidoo lens
     
  5. varundbest

    varundbest Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    In your dashboard, you will see a "MY Profile" tab. Click on it and when you scroll down, you will see "Global Ad Settings" just change it and ads are gone!
     
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    I should get someone to check the copy, there's a lot of simple grammatical errors and extra or missing words.
     
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    varundbest Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Yes i also found out but i though he would be using a spinner. BTW i am a good article writer :D
     
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    tabish8612 Power Member

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    Are you pointing to my squidoo lens... Can u tell me where are these error so I fix it out
     
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    Some of the errors are -
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    becoming more[COLOR="Red"] more[/COLOR] popular 
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    cut down their[COLOR="Red"] expanses[/COLOR] 
    There are many but i don't have time to point all of them out.
     
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    Ok thanks I will try to point it out and correct them as much as possible
     
  11. brchcar1445

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    First off, there is absolutely no reason to cloak your clickbank ID for squidoo. However I definitely have some advice for you.

    I sort of consider myself a squidoo expert. I have many lens that make me money but one of my better lens has earned me about 5k this year. Now I know that doesnt sound like a lot but thats not all the money I am making on lens. But its free and it took me like 2 hours to set up like 3 years ago. After owning it for about 6 months its been making me a lot of money.

    The first huge flaw in your lens is that you provide absolutely no value to the reader. People can find this solar energy stuff for free online. Its pretty available. If you search for a free method of making solar energy you will be hit with an abundance of crap on it. If you throw up a product people can get for free and provide them no value your dead in the water. You may get a sale here and there but not much more than that.

    The way I would have approached this is. Find a great method for making solar energy. Use one of the methods found in the ebook. Give them something of true value. Show them step by step how to do this, give them screen shots or a short vid. Once they use your info and make something successfully or realize your not just trying to sell them something they will be more likely to buy from you.

    After you give them this info mention your ebook for sale. Tell them that this way and others are displayed in detail within the ebook. If you give people some truly good content they will trust you and your going to start to get some positive comments on your guest book.
     
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    tabish8612 Power Member

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    Ya, You give me some valuable information. That's why I am failing to sale products. Can you share your squidoo lens here or pm me so I get better idea to get customers
     
  13. lalit_burma

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    By content wise I must say that your lens is simply great.

    But look wise I think there is room for improvement.
    - Your lens is about solar energy and environmental friendly, so select the green theme.
    - Add photos under polaroid modules, to make it more beautiful.
    - Network with other lens owner and get some good rating.
     
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    The term "build solar energy" is pretty competitive, so you might have a bit of a hard time getting results from just a SQ Lens.

    I would have gone after some less competitive that targets more buyers as well.
     
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    I never had any good results with Squidoo, I had a page ranked #7 in its category and it got 7 hits overall lol.. actually just checking it now seems I got a comment in december, lol. wow, page looks like crap.. I could do a much better job now!

    Yours seems much more content rich than mine was at the time so I'd say it looks pretty good.. You should have better results.

    as yukinari said, competitive so maybe think of this as your practice lense? unless you're really passionate about this :D
     
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    Looks good! Nice clean fresh layout and a video is always a plus. Id suggest cutting it down abit and perhaps throwing in a few more hyperlinks to your products sale page! whats your conversions like?