Please review my MNS

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  1. qrazy

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    Looks smart
     
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    The whole outlay looks good, clean but just looks too simple, maybe a logo or better header could give something to stand out a bit more.
     
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    have not really looked but i am not sure if this is easy to rank.
     
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    Why would you say that? because of the "-" which in my experience doesn't make a difference.
     
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    When I saw it I thought it would be difficult because the keyword will be saturated with marketers but I looked on Market Samurai and it looks quite easy. The search volume is low enough that I don't think a ton of BHW folk are going to try to steal your niche.

    Your site looks nice. I find the simple layout inviting.
     
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    design is cool. but I just want to suggest you that you should stick into your keywords. its important. I have seen that the articles are not related to the micro niche. you have to be careful when you write the articles.
     
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    Thank you everyone for reviewing it :)
     
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    First - that content reads as though its been spun more times than... like a well used washing machine.

    Do you really need an RSS feed on the front page? You won't be having to many articles.

    Also link out to some high PR domains - for instance linking to Wikipedia for the definition of a MNS (you'd be surprised how much leverage you can get out of a few OBL's).

    I'd probably get rid of the side bar and a few other elements on the home page as well and increase the width a bit to make it more like a landing page.

    Oh and sexy chicks, you need some pics of sexy chicks on there :p
     
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    Thanks for the review. The content is original though it's not of great quality :), my friend had written & he isn't a pro writer. He would go crazy if I say him that your content is "like a well used washing machine" heheeeee..