need SEO help in Youtube Video

I have create a new video for my youtube so, please check and let me know thet every think is good. and also give me suggestions.

the whole video needs voice over that the first problam.

there no intro of your deal url, .

there no outro of your deal url,

there no watermark of url on the whole video, video can be robed from anyone , big mistake ...

not cheeked seo.

title seo not cheeked.
description seo not cheeked .
in description url postion not cheeked
tags not cheeked seo tagged not cheeked.
wording length not cheeked.
avatar/image not cheeked.
domain for deal not checked.
domain quilty not checked.
cloak to deal or redirect not checked.

niche no kw checked, no longtail cheeked .

good luck.

video should be 4k