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My First Article :)

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  1. MasterF

    MasterF Registered Member

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    Hello BHW Members,

    First i want to say i`m honored to be here,i`m a member of bhw since Jun 16, 2015 and i learn a lot of things thnx to all of you!!

    As a tittle says this is my First Article Writen by myself for my Money Site

    WhatsApp Video Calling Starting Today

    Everyone's favorite chat-up Whatsapp has finally announced a feature that has been a long time coming video calling the service will go live in coming days letting users place video calls to any of what sets over 1 billion users across Android iOS and Windows devices.


    With this Whatsapp now has the ability to let you chat with your friends and family either through traditional text voice or vide once your whatsapp is updated to the

    latest version,all you have to do is go to the contact that you want to place a video called to hit the call button that was previously used to place voice calls and you'll get a choice to either place a voice called or a video call.


    It's fairly simple and give you the ability to have more personal conversations with your friends and family the feature is similar to what Google door and Skype offer but

    considering what sets massive user base and strengthen India we're optimistic.


    About the expected popularity of the feature ,keep in mind though that video calling will use a lot more data than ordinary voice calls so this will have a bit more impact on your data plan or Wi-Fi stadium to be in there for more videos and updates from the world of technology.


    Waiting for suggestions from you my friends,and feel free to take this article if u like ..

    Best Regards,

    MasterF
     
  2. Potatoe

    Potatoe Registered Member

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    Hi, is not this article too short for money site?
     
  3. MasterF

    MasterF Registered Member

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    Maybe idk but its just a example :)
     
  4. Sherbert Hoover

    Sherbert Hoover Jr. Executive VIP Jr. VIP

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    OP, to be brutally honest, that is one of the worst-sounding articles I've ever seen. It needs to be completely rewritten, reformatted, and definitely expanded. There are some strange words placed in the article for no reason whatsoever. Google Door? Wi-Fi Stadium? Since I'm feeling especially nice today, here is a rewrite. I handled the rewriting and reformatting. But I still wouldn't put it up on a money site. The entire article can literally be summed up as "Whatsapp Introduced Voice Calling"...

    Everybody's favorite chat app Whatsapp has finally announced their new, long-awaited feature: video calling. Whatsapp's video calling service has an estimated go-live of the next few days, and will allow application users to place video calls to any of their billion-plus users across Android, iOS, and Windows mobile devices.

    With this new development, Whatsapp now has the ability to let users chat with their friends through multiple media formats, including traditional text messaging, voice calls, and now the new video calling concept. Once you have updated your app to the latest version, all that is necessary is to navigate to the contact you wish to place a video call and hit the same button that was formerly used to place voice only calls. You will now have the choice to place either voice calls or video calls.

    It is a fairly simple idea that will allow Whatsapp users to have another layer of communication, mirroring what is currently offered by Google Hangouts, Skype, and FaceTime, and filling the void that was ever present in Whatsapp's business strategy and feature list. While the idea may not be new to market, the massive user base in India will give well over a billion people stronger utilization of features.

    It is worth noting that video calling is going to use a far larger quantity of data than ordinary voice calls. It is important if you do not have unlimited data plans or convenient Wi-Fi connection to keep an eye on your data usage when utilizing Whatsapp's voice calling capabilities.
     
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  5. ContentWriter

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    Hi, @MasterF. It was a nice try. Everyone needs to start somewhere. Nonetheless, your article needs to be proofread and edited. You need to expound it, too. It's too short for a money site.
     
  6. Jared255

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    Pop that shit into a free grammar checker to fix the problems with punctuation (mostly commas)
     
  7. MasterF

    MasterF Registered Member

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    thank you guys im still learning :)
     
  8. Eternal1912

    Eternal1912 Power Member

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    I think that you should take a few English writing courses. Try Grammarly, it would certainly improve your writing skills.
     
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