I wanted to say the same things, but then thought I'd be wasting my time. There are so many errors and mistakes (if you know the difference between the two), the article is never going to pass the editors... that's it. A*C isn't a simple personal blog, my dear friend, it's a business house and they want quality English articles. They also define what quality is, so give them that on their terms & conditions.
Also, by putting your submitted article here in toto, you've effectively given them a chance to ban you... think about it. Redtide and many other good members have already spoken about this factor, and I am amused at how people simply do not read those great advices and then put themselves in deep troubles.
P.S.: This is one of your paragraphs:
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Tie up with Travel Company is another experience. Travel companies do have more experience and will serve you better and you can see thoroughly and important points and in a short time you can see more than you see in your own chosen trip. In this arranged trip you will have a better chance of seeing a variety of animals.
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Now tell me how many mistakes are there -- count all the sentence-structure errors, punctuation errors, and definitely count your "and"s. Could you have re-written it better? Also, please explain, "and you can see thoroughly and" ... What do you want to say exactly? Of course, everyone can 'see thoroughly' if they want to!

What's the big deal! How does this sentence add more detail to your article?
Do you want to say that you can see the beauty of nature thoroughly and at your own leisure... that they can arrange for photo sessions, wait for exquisite birds, and may just be able to find some white elephants with their babies in tow, or be able to see a beautiful pregnant tigress to turn up quietly at the beautiful waterhole if they wait long enough -- possible only if they take a specially arranged private tour? Something of this sort... Paint the exotic picture, man! Think as if you are getting a last chance to win the gold at an Olympic event, and you're the only one who is participating... grab the chance of making your readers love your work! Make that article literally glow! Make the reader purchase that next flight ticket immediately!LOL
Another:
" They are Lion, leopard, elephant, rhino and buffalo."
Do you spot any mistake here?
Another:
"Even though these most fascinating safaris of Africa attract people all over the world people avoid them because of most high expensive tariffs."
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Anyway, no offence intended, of course!
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