I Need Feedback On My Logo

kingfuzz

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• #21

Thats nice do u freelance?

 

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romerro

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• #22

very neat

 

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kingfuzz said:

Thats nice do u freelance?

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Yeah I do mate.

 

Webbers UX

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Maybe a bit more metallic color ?

 

kayzne

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You can do better than that man. Start over.

There's nothing unique about it. "Abstract" I don't see it within the typography. The font is a basic sans serif.

It's clean, sure, but..boring, not very memorable. More Color, Modern font, something. It's bland.

<3 you tho!

 

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kayzne said:

You can do better than that man. Start over.

There's nothing unique about it. "Abstract" I don't see it within the typography. The font is a basic sans serif.

It's clean, sure, but..boring, not very memorable. More Color, Modern font, something. It's bland.

<3 you tho!

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It was actually Myraid Pro! Lol. Na you're right though, def gotta change the font

 

VelvetVampire

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maybe its too early or i didnt have enough coffee yet but i cant spot the difference between the 2 lol. nice design IMO tho

 

lqmatrix

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It's a good start, a few suggestions.

1. maybe add some sort of reflection in the face

2. add some color!

3. maybe switch up the fonts to match the feel of the astronaut head, font is a bit too generic.

 

badut jenaka

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Change the font to that reflect "abstract" would be perfect I think..

 

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jamesyboy

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Looks good, brah. Have you thought about how it will look on a letterhead? Or at the top of an invoice?

 

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badut jenaka said:

Change the font to that reflect "abstract" would be perfect I think..

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Check it

 

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JamesB1

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the most recent one is pretty good. I really like the astronaut logo

 

kayzne

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Getting better!!!!

P.S. I love Myriad Pro Usually! lol

 

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kekcyara

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I like it!

 

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kayzne said:

Getting better!!!!

P.S. I love Myriad Pro Usually! lol

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Usually!! hahaha

 

kayzne

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Couldn't resist! PM'd you some inspiration!

 

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acecxl

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New font looks much better. Still think it can use another color in the mix. Keep it up, you'll have the perfect logo soon

 

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Seems I cant edit the original post so here it is with some color added.. A little too much maybe? Also look in the glass of the helmet, theres a reflection of space Also I'm going to change the text. Just put it up like that for now.

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badut jenaka

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facebookdude said:

Check it

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Now that what I call perfect..simply elegant..

 

amazingRay

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naaaah facebookdude, don't like yours. no offence though, it looks good but too much colors for my liking! from the original ones i like the 3rd one, the font of it and the underlines kinda fit the logo.

 

Last edited: Apr 7, 2011