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I Need Feedback On My Logo

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by facebookdude, Apr 5, 2011.

  1. facebookdude

    facebookdude Elite Member

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    As most of you know I'm a designer, I am starting an offline design + marketing company in my home city. This is the first draft of it:

    Draft One:​

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    Draft Two:

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    Draft Three:

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    Any feedback is appreciated.

    Also shout out to Wiz, how about a design section of the forum for templates and design tools?
     
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  2. yourmy

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    It´s good.

    I like
     
  3. ba_laz

    ba_laz Power Member

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    pretty cool bro.
     
  4. karibo

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    Very nice. maybe some other grey tint in the words. Anyway its good now to so.. nice job :)
     
  5. ntrailz

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    I like it.

    You have probably tried this already but what happens if you shrink the canvas to make the image fill it more? And have you tried making the inside of the helmet (the face part) not transparent?

    Not saying it would look better, just wondered
     
  6. Underwater

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    That's awesome, but if you could change the shadow on the face (bend/curve it a bit) I believe that would be better.
     
  7. facebookdude

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    Exactly what I'm doing now actually haha
     
  8. clyde

    clyde Elite Member

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    How can I place an order? (serious)
     
  9. facebookdude

    facebookdude Elite Member

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    You can get me through PM
     
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    nice man.. !
    which one u use to make them...?
     
  11. facebookdude

    facebookdude Elite Member

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    Adobe Photoshop cs5
     
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    found out.
     
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  13. lacy1978

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    2nd draft is better. Overall it looks very nice.
     
  14. JackSparrow

    JackSparrow Supreme Member

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    I personally think adding a bit of colour would stop it from looking too bland, maybe keep the background pattern but make it two shades of blue. With a red helmet and a middling blue tint to the visor bit.

    Other than that i really like it.
     
  15. facebookdude

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    Thanks for the feedback man.
     
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    acecxl Newbie Premium Member

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    2nd one looks better. maybe you can try adding another color in the mix for some contrast. or you can add another element to fit in with the space theme - like a small rocket or comet with marketing and design written over it...
     
  17. facebookdude

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    Yeah I think I'll work on adding more color.
     
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    Why have an image other than what you want to say on your logo. Get rid of the image, get rid of the period

    Keep it plain and simple. What is important is if people can remember and recognize your logo. It does not have to be state of an art design.
     
  19. facebookdude

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    Wow. Never heard something so stupid lol I'm sorry. To me this is a pretty basic and I want the spaceman to be my symbol. Do you think every logo should just be the name of their company and that's it? LOL
     
  20. allblueskys

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    I think its pretty cool looking. Some people might not know what the helmet is though.