Best website description for SEO

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The current description for my site http://www.realpeterbruce.com is,

"We welcome you to your main source of promotional services, graphic design, music production, designer items, modelling and more."

I have included most of the keywords but it doesn't flow too well.
How could I make it more eyecatching from the google search listings? and also from a SEO point of view how could I improve it.

Any suggestions welcome. Thanks
 
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Title is not ok.

Desc..."we welcome blabla"...jump straight to the products/services you offer. Align them to the left as much as possible.

Create unique titles/desc for each of your pages.

ETC :)
 
From an SEO standpoint I always try to keep my keywords near the beginning of the meta description.

"We welcome you to our main source" eat's up like 50% of the displayed text - get to the juicy stuff right away and plop some keywords in there. Within the first 5 words I typically get my "location + keyword" mentioned for the local sites I do SEO for and then move onto mentioning a phone number or similar call to action.
 
Well first of all, your meta keywords are all messed up. You have no commas!

homepage homepage google homepages directories homepagers homepage design homepage of the dead homepage protection service homepage or home page homepage protection homepage games google homepage yahoo homepage google homepage usa msnbc news,
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Okay, you have one comma.

Separate those keywords.

Maybe instead of the "welcome" message, just start off with "The best in Graphics Design, Music Production" etc.

Also, your Title is too long. Get it down to 66 or fewer characters.
 
Nakota757 said:
Well first of all, your meta keywords are all messed up. You have no commas!



Okay, you have one comma.

Separate those keywords.

Maybe instead of the "welcome" message, just start off with "The best in Graphics Design, Music Production" etc.

Also, your Title is too long. Get it down to 66 or fewer characters.
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Thanks for the help.

I have edited the keyword to.. homepage, home, real, peter, bruce, realpeterbruce, social, media, marketing, youtube, facebook fans, views, fans, followers, twitter followers, youtube views, web traffic, buy website traffic, buy facebook fans, design, gfx, music production, beats, tags

My meta title was 'Home' i have deleted home.
You mean 'Social Media Marketing, Design, GFX, Music Production, Mastering, Model Advertising, Designer Fashion &MORE' ?

I'm not sure how I would change it?
 
Include keywords in description and be sure it's no longer than 160 characters.
 
Kikac said:
Include keywords in description and be sure it's no longer than 160 characters.
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How does this sound... "The Best of Promotional Social Media Services, GFX Design, Music Production, Designer Items, Modelling & more! - Buy Website Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services" ?

Little too long?
 
173 characters...keep it under 160. Something starting with:

Promotional Social Media Services, GFX Design....
 
How exactly can I improve on
"The Best in Promotional Social Media Marketing, GFX Design, Music Production, Designer Items & Modelling! - Buy Web Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services"

Any ideas?
Should I delete "Buy Web Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services" to make it less than 160 characters?
 
peterbruce said:
How exactly can I improve on
"The Best in Promotional Social Media Marketing, GFX Design, Music Production, Designer Items & Modelling! - Buy Web Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services"

Any ideas?
Should I delete "Buy Web Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services" to make it less than 160 characters?
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How about this?

"The Best in Promotional Social Media Marketing, GFX Design, Music Production and Designer Items! - Buy Web Traffic, Facebook Fans and YouTube Services"
 
Nakota757 said:
How about this?

"The Best in Promotional Social Media Marketing, GFX Design, Music Production and Designer Items! - Buy Web Traffic, Facebook Fans and YouTube Services"
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I was keeping the words buy, buy and buy as those are my long tail keywords?

I'm really unsure.

Should I purchase this social bookmarking service http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/buy-sell-services/74618-social-bookmark-service-8-125-submissions.html ?

I hear most people purchase this service for new sites. But my site is already indexed?
 
peterbruce said:
I was keeping the words buy, buy and buy as those are my long tail keywords?

I'm really unsure.

Should I purchase this social bookmarking service http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackh...ocial-bookmark-service-8-125-submissions.html ?

I hear most people purchase this service for new sites. But my site is already indexed?
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I don't see all of those keywords in your meta keyword list.

"The Best in Promotional Social Media Marketing, GFX Design, Music Production and Designer Items! - Buy Web Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services"

155 characters, is that one better for you?

I've used it, it's a great service. It couldn't hurt to add more social bookmark backlinks to your site, plus it's cheaper than dirt. Are all of your inner pages ranked? If not, buy the service for the unindexed inner pages.
 
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Nakota757 said:
I don't see all of those keywords in your meta keyword list.

"The Best in Promotional Social Media Marketing, GFX Design, Music Production and Designer Items! - Buy Web Traffic, Buy Facebook Fans, Buy YouTube Services"

155 characters, is that one better for you?

I've used it, it's a great service. It couldn't hurt to add more social bookmark backlinks to your site, plus it's cheaper than dirt. Are all of your inner pages ranked? If not, buy the service for the unindexed inner pages.
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Thanks. Yes that sounds better!

How do I find which are ranked? Search for realpeterbruce on google and see which show up?

Maybe I'm totally wrong.
 
Description should look like this:

"Your main keyword: We offer bla bla bla bla" under 160 characters.

Don't make description like "We offer keyword, keyword, keyword"
 
Gudrulea said:
Description should look like this:

"Your main keyword: We offer bla bla bla bla" under 160 characters.

Don't make description like "We offer keyword, keyword, keyword"
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The problem is I have 5+ main keywords (Services I'm selling)
Not just one main keyword.
 
peterbruce said:
The problem is I have 5+ main keywords (Services I'm selling)
Not just one main keyword.
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Mate

You are creating the same thread again. We have talked so much on skype with you.

It is impossible to get that site to the point that you want. NEVER.

Because you are aiming too high without knowing anything.

My advice. Start with a site that will make $1/day for you. Not a joke. Really I am serious. You cannot beat twitter or facebook.
 
edgematch said:
Mate

You are creating the same thread again. We have talked so much on skype with you.

It is impossible to get that site to the point that you want. NEVER.

Because you are aiming too high without knowing anything.

My advice. Start with a site that will make $1/day for you. Not a joke. Really I am serious. You cannot beat twitter or facebook.
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I have many clients who purchase weekly. This website is mainly a place for them to order.
I'm already making a decent income selling these services. What's the point of going back to step one, making $1 a day?
 
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