FB giveaway post - many likes, no shares and comments

[Coreman]

Hey Guys,
I was created giveaway where winner will get free label for supplement product.
Method is PPE, and particitioant need to like page, tage 2 friends and share post.
There are hundreds likes, but nobody didn't do correct thing to participate for giveaway.

We tried with USA and low costr countries, results are the same.

Here are statistics and posts, is anybody know what I am doing wrong?


Thanks!

 

[islandman1010]

"giving away a highly converting label" That makes no sense.

 

[islandman1010]

What was you trying to say?

 

[Coreman]

Is sounds better "giving away professional label"?

 

[islandman1010]

Is sounds better "giving away professional label"?

No... Label is the problem. What are you actually giving people? Do you mean a "voucher" they can use to get a product?

 

[Coreman]

No, "label" is word that means label and box packaging design. So who will win we will make him/her fre package design for his/her product.

 

[islandman1010]

Ok got you now. Label really isn't the word you want if you are targeting English speakers. Just look on Wikipedia for samples of what we know as a "label" What you are doing is something like designing a marketing package - or branding - product design - digital marketing design - product branding - professionally designed branding... Things like that. But label really doesnt work.

What we see as a label.

 

[Coreman]

What you think about "package design", because "product design" can be related to designing bottles, which we dont do in this contest?
btw Islandman Thanks a lot!

 

[islandman1010]

What you think about "package design", because "product design" can be related to designing bottles, which we dont do in this contest?
btw Islandman Thanks a lot!

You can use HIGHLY CONVERTING "product design package" or "marketing package" Marketing package is more for helping someone to get more sales so that might be the best one. "HIGHLY CONVERTING marketing packages" is very easy for English speakers to understand.

 

[Coreman]

Thanks! I will keep posting about this, maybe some newbies like me can learn from my mistakes.

 

[islandman1010]

Thanks! I will keep posting about this, maybe some newbies like me can learn from my mistakes.

That's ok. English can be difficult as we have so many correct and incorrect ways of saying things that make sense in one situation but not in another.

 

[Coreman]

Hello there,
Again same things, more likes but nobody to do action by instruction.
I think that there is too much text and humans eye is like: "Oh God there is 10 lines of text, screw it!"
So, I will remove text from red marked area like on "ad-day2.jpg" then we will see how this will going.
If anyone have some ideas, feel free to suggest.

 

[sandandkush]

Hello there,
Again same things, more likes but nobody to do action by instruction.
I think that there is too much text and humans eye is like: "Oh God there is 10 lines of text, screw it!"
So, I will remove text from red marked area like on "ad-day2.jpg" then we will see how this will going.
If anyone have some ideas, feel free to suggest.

That's a good start; shorten simplify the caption.
You can try tier 3 targets first to get the engagement and reach (which are cheaper and more accessible) then target the USA audience later with more define settings such as cities and interest.
Also, you may want to consider trying other photos or possibly a video).

 

[VinceC]

Maybe you can try this:

3 STEPS to win this contest:

1. Like
2. Tag 2 Friends
3. Share

 

[SOCIALSTYLE4U]

i dont even understand what he/she wanted to say for could someone tell me what giveaway is it?

 

[wwa2b]

i dont even understand what he/she wanted to say for could someone tell me what giveaway is it?

I think you nailed the problem

 

[Coreman]

I serious considering about video, that will give better results definitelly.
Even guys from this forum don't understand what we giving, that is indication how text is confusing.
On fiverr i will find some fintess girl that tells what participiant need to do.
Video will be about 60 seconds, not longer.

 

[islandman1010]

I think it's a tough niche too. Somebody starting to sell a health product is not often going to need some designs unless it is their own product. I would imagine most people that sign up as health affiliates are given a lot of free adverts they can use in their campaigns. Are you giving them an advert to use in their own product?

 

[Coreman]

No, my audience are people who start selling new health product and need professional design and professional and realistic product photos.

On ad I will make some arrow tho show on side for more info. For now I have buch of horny men that give complement to girl from ad.

Also I consireding live streanig on Facebook, some kind of advising for enterpreneurs, because not all of the are vusual types. Something more like advising, not like selling something to them.