Which Headline Should I Use?

rafark

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Jan 15, 2013

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• Aug 15, 2019

• #21

#1

"Are You Overly Shy? Put An End to Your Social Anxiety Once And For All." <--- this sounds like the beginning of your typical as-seen-on-tv commercial. A big pass for me.

 

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Bima Sembodo

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• Aug 26, 2019

• #22

No.10 is good thats it but make sure you add a picture or words that can visualize customer about the benefit of your product

 

ApiSeller

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• Aug 26, 2019

• #23

Go with this one

1. Is Your Shyness Keeping You From Living A Happy Life? Here’s How You Can Fix It.

 

dabax

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• Apr 29, 2020

• #24

Like most #10 sounds best. Purely because it sounds personal and more "real'

 

Evan Grayson

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• May 3, 2020

• #25

I would suggest going with the last point: Here’s How I Cured Myself Of Social Anxiety And Shyness. As a viewer this would get my attention because I will be able to relate with you on a personal level. Whenever someone shares their own experience then people always look into it as they find it to be more genuine then other posts. It makes them feel connected to you.

 

RankDaddy

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• May 3, 2020

• #26

NO 10
Here’s How I Cured Myself Of Social Anxiety And Shyness.