Whats wrong with my landing page?

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  1. Figrole

    Figrole Regular Member

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    Hey guys,
    New to this whole IM scene and trying to get my feet wet in it.

    Ive decided on a niche to try pursue, that of the fishing industry.

    I set up a landing page and a facebook ad campaign and trying to drive traffic to my site. It s for a giveaway for a pretty good prize, all they have to do is "enter email address" to enter.

    In my last day of ad i have reached, 319 people - all targeted. Male 30-50 in america with interests in various types of fishing.
    From that I have about 23 clicks, none of which signed up for my email list.

    Is my landing page not effective? or is my ad wrongly constructed? or is it just a bad niche in general?

    Since I am a n00b i cannot post exact links but i will try!
    dannyslureshop. us / giveaway / (no spaces)
     
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    I am getting an error - "Page Not Found"
     
  3. Hawkster

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    There is a giveaway section on reddit, try that.

    https://www.reddit.com/r/giveaways/ < thats just one subreddit

    Its late and im going to bed so i cant find more...

    Go and do some searching and you'll find a few subreddits you can post too. Its free traffic
     
  4. Figrole

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    That's so good thank you for your help.

    I have tried to use Twitter as well with automated tweets - going to try every method I can !
     
  5. Indigjason

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    The problome is your going straight to ask for email b4 register for event,, try viralsweep its not my website but i have used for same situation and it worked well. they will not only random draw the prize for you but also captures the email.. just a thought good luck
     
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  6. Alchemizt

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    I agree with Indigs comment above. Overall your lander looks good. I like it. But you gotta romance them a bit before going for the home run. Show the cash and prizes first to entice and then ask them to give up their goods (email address). Treat em like a lady that you are trying to take home for the first time. Impress before you undress. Otherwise love your page. Looks good.
     
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