What do you think about my website

I would change the header. The colors don't Blend together well. The site looks like it was put together in a few minutes. Spend some time getting a logo designer from fiverr. there are plenty good ones that I have used myself. Some of them have 50 pending orders so you know they are good. Hit me up and I can provide some recommendations.

Get your self a template

I changed my website i used a free LP hope you like it more now.
I am ready to get punched again

That looks so much more pro then the original - good job! Of course though there are a few things I would change ... Including but not limited to: The keyword should be bold in the header and the subtitle to focus the user on the expected outcome. The product box version should not be an even number but for example 1.21 or 2.45 which sounds less made up (Walmart does this) and also unwittingly promotes the products experience in the market. I am not sure but is that Lorem Ipsum data at the bottom of the box? If so scratch that and add some testimonial or alike continent. Now speaking of testimonials ... they should really be beefed up 1 liners don't sell sh*t. Finally as davie9x mentioned above you should really add copyright info in the footer of the page.

I was bored so I also marked up a screen shot of the site with some horrifically almost illegible mouse written notes.

Good luck and keep us updated.

NojWang said:

That looks so much more pro then the original - good job! Of course though there are a few things I would change ... Including but not limited to: The keyword should be bold in the header and the subtitle to focus the user on the expected outcome. The product box version should not be an even number but for example 1.21 or 2.45 which sounds less made up (Walmart does this) and also unwittingly promotes the products experience in the market. I am not sure but is that Lorem Ipsum data at the bottom of the box? If so scratch that and add some testimonial or alike continent. Now speaking of testimonials ... they should really be beefed up 1 liners don't sell sh*t. Finally as davie9x mentioned above you should really add copyright info in the footer of the page.

I was bored so I also marked up a screen shot of the site with some horrifically almost illegible mouse written notes.

Good luck and keep us updated.

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Hey,

Thank you for your input i would like to give you a ton of reputation but it says i cant.
Thanks again and i will change that now.

This actually looks better than the download from Youtube website I used and relied on before it was taken down last month. The only thing I think could look better is the box cover image. If you maybe tidied that up to make it look more realistic it will look more legitimate.

Do a custom header...current version looks a bit too timid...people who want to download from youtube are not the same kind of people who will be attracted to what is now a pretty low-key page. This page would work well if you were selling accounting services or casual slacks to the +65 crowd...liven it up a bit, a splash of colour in your header and in your big button will do wonders.

I think you are still in your first stage of web design. You should do much better than this. And i know that you can do that.