Update to MakingWomenOrgasm.com - Hit it Hard :)

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theviralguy

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Hey guys,

I finally got a nice new sales page for my orgasm product.

If you haven't seen my last thread about this product you can read it here:
http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackh...-guide-no-competition-looking-affiliates.html

The product didn't convert so well but I now have a great graphic sales page thanks to richman :) And have updated the copy a bit with a little story about "me" at the beginning.

I will continue to make improvements to the actual copy and there are a few things left to do as well.


Sales Page is here:

makingwomenorgasm.com
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Affiliate tools are here:

makingwomenorgasm.com/affiliates.html
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Your Hoplink:

YOURCBID.sqbook.hop.clickbank.net
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Let me know how you like the new design and copy, and anything you want from me.

Hit it hard ;)
 
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Can I know who made that salespage/contact info?
 
does that niche convert? page looks nice!
 
IT is converting better, but I don't have much traffic being sent so not many sales. My top 2 affiliates are less than 100 hops/order.
 
The sales page looks great. I'll watch your conversion stats in the Marketplace with interest. If it converts well, I'll add you to my list of preferred items to promote.
 
@zupreme

Thanks but what do you mean watch my conversion stats in the marketplace? I've never seen a way you can see conversion stats...

But I will be posting some stats once this runs for a bit more on the new sales page.
 
Decided to post some stats from today anyways....

The $17 is my commission not the affiliates, you make $20/sale.

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'I remember the screams that night! Was it ever loud!'

Pretty sure that doesn't make sense.
 
@Facebookdude

Yeah I was trying to make it fit right, and wasn't too worried about being grammatically correct. I'm sure ppl will understand what I mean.

@craigs

pm sent.
 
facebookdude said:
'I remember the screams that night! Was it ever loud!'

Pretty sure that doesn't make sense.
Click to expand...

It's grammatically fine, but I would change it to say "I remember the screams from that night. Boy, was it ever loud!"
 
use "squirt" or "cum", not "ejaculate"

"ejaculate" is specific to men and kinda throws off the entire sales pitch :\
 
what....

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_ejaculation

But anyways I can't use "squirt" clickbank doesn't like it. My guide was supposed to be called makingwomensquirt.com but they made me change the domain and remove squirt from all the copy.

Are you sure it is specific to men or just thought that... wikipedia doesn't lie does it?? :P
 
You really should have a contact form instead of that email adress and a privacy policy page so it looks more pro.
 
As per suggestions the price has been raised to $47 for now. This means more money for affiliates :)
 
I'm thinking about promoting this, but there are some hang ups in your copy. Such as...
"This really hurt me and I really wanted to fix this problem, so I set off to find the problem."

Fix this stuff
 
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