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Update to MakingWomenOrgasm.com - Hit it Hard :)

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by theviralguy, Nov 19, 2010.

  1. theviralguy

    theviralguy Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Hey guys,

    I finally got a nice new sales page for my orgasm product.

    If you haven't seen my last thread about this product you can read it here:
    http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackh...-guide-no-competition-looking-affiliates.html

    The product didn't convert so well but I now have a great graphic sales page thanks to richman :) And have updated the copy a bit with a little story about "me" at the beginning.

    I will continue to make improvements to the actual copy and there are a few things left to do as well.


    Sales Page is here:

    Affiliate tools are here:

    Your Hoplink:

    Let me know how you like the new design and copy, and anything you want from me.

    Hit it hard ;)
     
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  2. agag2

    agag2 Supreme Member

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    Can I know who made that salespage/contact info?
     
  3. theviralguy

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  4. Nookie Monster

    Nookie Monster Senior Member

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    Need to proof read the page. You misspelled ejaculate in "Can Every Woman Really Ejaculate".
     
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  5. ThunderC

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    looking good
    i'll give it a try.
     
  6. mudbutt

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    does that niche convert? page looks nice!
     
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  7. theviralguy

    theviralguy Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    IT is converting better, but I don't have much traffic being sent so not many sales. My top 2 affiliates are less than 100 hops/order.
     
  8. ShadeDream

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    WOW, that's some sexy sales page you got there...
     
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  9. zupreme

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    The sales page looks great. I'll watch your conversion stats in the Marketplace with interest. If it converts well, I'll add you to my list of preferred items to promote.
     
  10. theviralguy

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    @zupreme

    Thanks but what do you mean watch my conversion stats in the marketplace? I've never seen a way you can see conversion stats...

    But I will be posting some stats once this runs for a bit more on the new sales page.
     
  11. theviralguy

    theviralguy Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Decided to post some stats from today anyways....

    The $17 is my commission not the affiliates, you make $20/sale.

    [​IMG]
     
  12. facebookdude

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    'I remember the screams that night! Was it ever loud!'

    Pretty sure that doesn't make sense.
     
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  13. craigs

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    Can i see a review copy first?
     
  14. theviralguy

    theviralguy Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    @Facebookdude

    Yeah I was trying to make it fit right, and wasn't too worried about being grammatically correct. I'm sure ppl will understand what I mean.

    @craigs

    pm sent.
     
  15. Griggs

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    It's grammatically fine, but I would change it to say "I remember the screams from that night. Boy, was it ever loud!"
     
  16. tacopalypse

    tacopalypse Executive VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    use "squirt" or "cum", not "ejaculate"

    "ejaculate" is specific to men and kinda throws off the entire sales pitch :\
     
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  17. theviralguy

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    what....

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_ejaculation

    But anyways I can't use "squirt" clickbank doesn't like it. My guide was supposed to be called makingwomensquirt.com but they made me change the domain and remove squirt from all the copy.

    Are you sure it is specific to men or just thought that... wikipedia doesn't lie does it?? :p
     
  18. Erik Creed

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    You really should have a contact form instead of that email adress and a privacy policy page so it looks more pro.
     
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  19. theviralguy

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    As per suggestions the price has been raised to $47 for now. This means more money for affiliates :)
     
  20. Longover

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    I'm thinking about promoting this, but there are some hang ups in your copy. Such as...
    "This really hurt me and I really wanted to fix this problem, so I set off to find the problem."

    Fix this stuff