This Landing Page : Good or S#it?

planck said:

You are truly one of those literal guys, aren't you?

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Sherb said:

Agreed, and I don't see a single avocado.

What I do see are three different font/styles used in 21 words total.

Also, a single word at the bottom line that could easily just tie into the first line with a slightly smaller font size, and two periods instead of one at the end.

Other than that, title bigger, a little more even spacing between elements. Solid, minimal approach though.

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TheVigilante said:

Could be but try adding more variations if that does not work!

Test test test

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Buzzika said:

Look up copywriting formulas and try to use them.

You will end up with an eye catching headline, maybe a bit more description about what the page is actually talking about and that alone would make a lot of difference.

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ShiningWarrior said:

That's not a free ebook. Its a paid one. I didnt write FREE anywhere.

Why did you think it is free?

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Shyam007 said:

That's what the sales page claims FREE (+shipping off course)

Ketores!

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krishnaverma said:

It looks fine. I would not click but I am not average internet user.

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ShiningWarrior said:

Hey all, what do you think of this landing page?

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It's hosted on weebly.com

What do you think and would you click on it?

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flundererboy said:

Its look good, but it much better if you add description paragraph in it. And also navigation is not shown anywhere. navigation is very important

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rabbitking said:

I'm not this or that.

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contentcreators said:

Click here to know what? I'd change the wording on your call to action button.

You need to sell the benefits of the keto diet so I'd change it to something like "I want to lose weight eating bacon!"

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