This Landing Page : Good or S#it?

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Hey all, what do you think of this landing page?

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It's hosted on weebly.com

What do you think and would you click on it?
 

Aty

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By the way, CLICK HERE TO KNOW??? To know what?
 

Sherb

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Needs more bacon

Agreed, and I don't see a single avocado.

What I do see are three different font/styles used in 21 words total.

Also, a single word at the bottom line that could easily just tie into the first line with a slightly smaller font size, and two periods instead of one at the end.

Other than that, title bigger, a little more even spacing between elements. Solid, minimal approach though.
 

Buzzika

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Look up copywriting formulas and try to use them.

You will end up with an eye catching headline, maybe a bit more description about what the page is actually talking about and that alone would make a lot of difference.
 
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