This Landing Page : Good or S#it?

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

Hey all, what do you think of this landing page?

It's hosted on weebly.com

What do you think and would you click on it?

Aty · Jul 8, 2018

Looks to me like the "secret sauce" is missing. Other than that it's not that bad.

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

Aty said:
Looks to me like the "secret sauce" is missing. Other than that it's not that bad.

Thanks for the reply. And what's the secret sauce mate?

Aty · Jul 8, 2018

By the way, CLICK HERE TO KNOW??? To know what?

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

Aty said:
By the way, CLICK HERE TO KNOW??? To know what?

Know about the book?

TheVigilante · Jul 8, 2018

You offering a free ebook pertaining the information to grab subscribers or what?

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

TheVigilante said:
You offering a free ebook pertaining the information to grab subscribers or what?

That's not a free ebook. Its a paid one. I didnt write FREE anywhere.

Why did you think it is free?

Aty · Jul 8, 2018

ShiningWarrior said:
Know about the book?

Maybe "click here to find out more" would be more suitable.

TheVigilante · Jul 8, 2018

ShiningWarrior said:
That's not a free ebook. Its a paid one. I didnt write FREE anywhere.

Why did you think it is free?

You wrote click here to know that's why I guessed

awesomewebsites · Jul 8, 2018

It looks fine. I would not click but I am not average internet user.

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

Aty said:
Maybe "click here to find out more" would be more suitable.

TheVigilante said:
You wrote click here to know that's why I guessed

So the appropriate CTA would be Click Here To Find Out More?

Deleted member 708208 · Jul 8, 2018

Needs more bacon

sesomayid · Jul 8, 2018

I think it's ok but need to be more detail

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

rabbitking said:
Needs more bacon

sesomayid said:
I think it's ok but need to be more detail

U both mean more keys points were needed on the landing page to captivate the potential buyer's attention, right?

Deleted member 708208 · Jul 8, 2018

ShiningWarrior said:
U both mean more keys points were needed on the landing page to captivate the potential buyer's attention, right?

I literally meant it needs more bacon in the picture.

Sherb · Jul 8, 2018

rabbitking said:
Needs more bacon

Agreed, and I don't see a single avocado.

What I do see are three different font/styles used in 21 words total.

Also, a single word at the bottom line that could easily just tie into the first line with a slightly smaller font size, and two periods instead of one at the end.

Other than that, title bigger, a little more even spacing between elements. Solid, minimal approach though.

ShiningWarrior · Jul 8, 2018

rabbitking said:
I literally meant it needs more bacon in the picture.

Ah but there were no more food pics with the vendor lol

TheVigilante · Jul 8, 2018

ShiningWarrior said:
So the appropriate CTA would be Click Here To Find Out More?

Could be but try adding more variations if that does not work!

Test test test

planck · Jul 8, 2018

rabbitking said:
I literally meant it needs more bacon in the picture.

You are truly one of those literal guys, aren't you?

Buzzika · Jul 8, 2018

Look up copywriting formulas and try to use them.

You will end up with an eye catching headline, maybe a bit more description about what the page is actually talking about and that alone would make a lot of difference.

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