SWTOR - Use the Force - Leveling Guide is now Live!

Mr Ex said:
I can see that you've changed some parts but general lay out is kind of messy. There's too much text and graphics plus a video so it makes it really difficult to read and understand what you are really offering, it's distraction to the eye. You are over killing it.

I suggest you take a look at some of the successful landing pages on cb to have an idea about what works. Instead of trying to talk about everything, you should keep it simple, clean and straight to the point. It's already hard to go through a long sales page and you are making it more difficult for the visitor. You could take some of the text out and it would still say the same thing.

When they ask you about a movie, you don't describe it scene by scene. You just tell the main story. You simplify it and get rid of the unnecessary details, right? That's what you should do. Also do not be afraid of using bold letters and highlighting. This way, when your visitors skim through the copy (they certainly will) they can still see the most important features and benefits of your product.
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Thanks Ex. I'm going to be doing some major updates this weekend and will take your pointers into consderation. Appreciate the constructive criticism!
 
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Hey guys, I've been working like crazy day and night to add content to the sales page. Here is more conversion data for the last 24 hours. As you can see conversions are steadily improving!

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Check out the conversion rates in the hops per order field.

I'll continue to post conversion data in the next few days!

Thanks
 
Hey guys, here are more conversions from the past 24 hours:

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As you can see, the conversion rate is increasing as promised! One of the affiliates has earned 5 sales after sending only 54 hops (10% conversion rate).

Also, we have had ZERO refunds so far!

Check out the affiliate page for more resources which have been added recently as well:

http://www.swtorusetheforce.com/aff.html
 
Here's another screenshot of conversions from the past 12 hours:

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As you can see, conversions are still increasing nicely.. and refunds are ZERO!

Thanks to all who contacted me recently about promoting!

Cheers
 
Thanks for the advice, I'll be emailing you for a review copy if still available...I'm probably coming in a little late for this product, as I'm sure the competition has increased by now.
 
This is intriguing. A great game and hopefully a great selling product!
 
Got my domain, working on content now, kinda hard cause I know squat about this game. but will look into it
 
My friend sells a few gaming guides, he said the SWTOR market is saturated right now... :(
 
Fractious said:
My friend sells a few gaming guides, he said the SWTOR market is saturated right now... :(
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I found many keywords that will be quite easy to rank for. This MMO is going to grow and grow, now is the time to get in it IMO.
 
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