trevorhoang
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wow the competition is fierce. you black hattters are crazy. some domains were bought back in 2009.
SWTOR - Use the Force - Leveling Guide is now Live!
- Thread starter infogeek
- Start date
Hey guys, I just sent the review copies to all you affiliates who emailed and requested. I'm currently updating the sales page like crazy, added a lot of elements.. currently working on some videos.
Once these videos are complete, they'll be available for you guys to take and post on your youtube/dailymotion or other account and slap your affiliate link in the description, or feel free to manip the video and slap it on the actual video itself!
Will give the word once these are ready and will load them on the affiliate resource page.
Thanks guys!
Once these videos are complete, they'll be available for you guys to take and post on your youtube/dailymotion or other account and slap your affiliate link in the description, or feel free to manip the video and slap it on the actual video itself!
Will give the word once these are ready and will load them on the affiliate resource page.
Thanks guys!
Updates: Added a bunch of selling points as well as a video at the top! Another video on the way. Feel free to use current video on site for your youtube/dailymotion or other to promote your affiliate link!
Gotta run, will post more updates soon! Thanks guys.
Gotta run, will post more updates soon! Thanks guys.
Hey guys, HUGE UPDATE:
Just spent the last 8 hours going at it.. MAJOR UPDATES made!
Added more: screen shots, selling points, video, and testimonials
Thanks to all you affiliates who contacted me about review copies, and good luck promoting!
Just spent the last 8 hours going at it.. MAJOR UPDATES made!
Added more: screen shots, selling points, video, and testimonials
Thanks to all you affiliates who contacted me about review copies, and good luck promoting!
Thanks buddy!
I'm in the process of creating some videos for affiliate promotional purposes ONLY.. will give the word once these are up on the resource page.
Feel free to shoot me a PM / email if you need any help at all, and do keep me updated! Thanks.
-infogeek
Hey guys, here's some conversion data from the past 12 hours:
As you can see, I've been going crazy with all the tweaks and the page is converting nicely now! (no less than 4% conversions)
The order form sale conversion is also pretty high.. I have recently customized and updated the order form which will further increase conversions!
Feel free to hit me up if you need any help!
As you can see, I've been going crazy with all the tweaks and the page is converting nicely now! (no less than 4% conversions)
The order form sale conversion is also pretty high.. I have recently customized and updated the order form which will further increase conversions!
Feel free to hit me up if you need any help!
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trevorhoang
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gj. no sales for me yet.
@trevorhoang : Sorry to hear that man. May I ask how you're promoting?
Update: Also, just to let you guys know the affiliate videos are now available on the affiliate resource page for you to grab and upload to your youtube / daily motion / other video account and promote your affiliate link!
Good luck all!
Update: Also, just to let you guys know the affiliate videos are now available on the affiliate resource page for you to grab and upload to your youtube / daily motion / other video account and promote your affiliate link!
Good luck all!
...in a galaxy far far away? LOL!
Thanks guys, I'll be doing some more updates later today and will send the info
Mr Ex
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- Sep 13, 2009
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Cat got your tongue?
Why don't you at least hire someone on fiver to voice over the sales copy? There are really talented people out there and you can hire one of them for around 20 bucks to voice over it for you.Also I suggest you change the headline. "Fastest time possible" is kind of vague. Is it five days? Is it 5 weeks or what? MMO players don't want to waste time grinding or leveling up. They are looking for the short cut.
For instance, instead of saying "Reach level 50 in the fastest time possible" you could say " Discover This Dirty Little Short Cut That Will Get You To Level 50 In Less Than 96 Hours".
Now when the visitors land on the page, just by reading your headline they will right of the bat know that if they buy your guide, they can reach the level cap in less than 96 hours. This is how you hook them and make them to read more. Headline is one of the most important parts of a sales copy and you should take advantage of it.
Another thing I noticed is all the negative crap at the bottom of the page. You should talk about why they should buy your product. NOT why they shouldn't buy it lol. I know you tried to be sarcastic but it doesn't work that way. You should always talk about the positive aspects of it. If they don't buy then it's their loss, but there's a better way of saying that. Visitors are already on the fence, so don't pull them back.
For instance, you could just reword this and make it a positive statement:
Why You Should Take Advantage Of My Guide? (Avoid the word "buy")
* Using cheats, hacks will eventually get you banned.
* Instead of spending hundreds of hours struggling with quests and grinding, you could be enjoying the end game content in less than 96 hours!
* Using cheats, hacks will eventually get you banned.
* Instead of spending hundreds of hours struggling with quests and grinding, you could be enjoying the end game content in less than 96 hours!
* Once you start using my guide, you will never have to pay for expensive leveling services, ever. Use the force is a well laid out, step by step leveling guide that is compatible with all the classes in the game!
* Drop this one out and find a better benefit. Because no matter how good your guide is, talking bad about others does not leave a good impression.
* Discover all the in game content and destroy your foes in pvp with the coolest in game weapons and gear.
* Make your nick name a legend. The guilds will literally beg you to have you as a member and your opponents will think twice to challenge you in Pvp ( If there's a guild system. Never played swtor).
* Never struggle financially. You will always have plenty of gold (or whatever the currency is) to buy whatever you want, whenever you want.
These are some of the examples that i could think of. Don't forget that most mmo players are teenagers and all they want is to reach the level cap as fast as they can and having the best in game weapon/gear set for pvp.
P.S: You should avoid using the "buy" word as much as you can. Instead of order now, you could say "Make me level 50 Now!" etc. You should push their emotional buttons as much as you can to increase your conversion rate.
Good luck.
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Cat got your tongue?
Also I suggest you change the headline. "Fastest time possible" is kind of vague. Is it five days? Is it 5 weeks or what? MMO players don't want to waste time grinding or leveling up. They are looking for the short cut.
For instance, instead of saying "Reach level 50 in the fastest time possible" you could say " Discover This Dirty Little Short Cut That Will Get You To Level 50 In Less Than 96 Hours".
Now when the visitors land on the page, just by reading your headline they will right of the bat know that if they buy your guide, they can reach the level cap in less than 96 hours. This is how you hook them and make them to read more. Headline is one of the most important parts of a sales copy and you should take advantage of it.
Another thing I noticed is all the negative crap at the bottom of the page. You should talk about why they should buy your product. NOT why they shouldn't buy it lol. I know you tried to be sarcastic but it doesn't work that way. You should always talk about the positive aspects of it. If they don't buy then it's their loss, but there's a better way of saying that. Visitors are already on the fence, so don't pull them back.
For instance, you could just reword this and make it a positive statement:
Why You Should Take Advantage Of My Guide? (Avoid the word "buy")
* Using cheats, hacks will eventually get you banned.
* Instead of spending hundreds of hours struggling with quests and grinding, you could be enjoying the end game content in less than 96 hours!
* Once you start using my guide, you will never have to pay for expensive leveling services, ever. Use the force is a well laid out, step by step leveling guide that is compatible with all the classes in the game!
* Drop this one out and find a better benefit. Because no matter how good your guide is, talking bad about others does not leave a good impression.
* Discover all the in game content and destroy your foes in pvp with the coolest in game weapons and gear.
* Make your nick name a legend. The guilds will literally beg you to have you as a member and your opponents will think twice to challenge you in Pvp ( If there's a guild system. Never played swtor).
* Never struggle financially. You will always have plenty of gold (or whatever the currency is) to buy whatever you want, whenever you want.
These are some of the examples that i could think of. Don't forget that most mmo players are teenagers and all they want is to reach the level cap as fast as they can and having the best in game weapon/gear set for pvp.
P.S: You should avoid using the "buy" word as much as you can. Instead of order now, you could say "Make me level 50 Now!" etc. You should push their emotional buttons as much as you can to increase your conversion rate.
Good luck.
Hey Ex, thanks for your jampacked post full of great tips.
I took into consideration what you pointed out and made some tweaks as per your suggestions.. take a look and let me know what you think!
Thanks again to all the affiliates who contacted me today about promoting!
EvilEmperor
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- Sep 5, 2011
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I emailed you
Mr Ex
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I can see that you've changed some parts but general lay out is kind of messy. There's too much text and graphics plus a video so it makes it really difficult to read and understand what you are really offering, it's distraction to the eye. You are over killing it.
I suggest you take a look at some of the successful landing pages on cb to have an idea about what works. Instead of trying to talk about everything, you should keep it simple, clean and straight to the point. It's already hard to go through a long sales page and you are making it more difficult for the visitor. You could take some of the text out and it would still say the same thing.
When they ask you about a movie, you don't describe it scene by scene. You just tell the main story. You simplify it and get rid of the unnecessary details, right? That's what you should do. Also do not be afraid of using bold letters and highlighting. This way, when your visitors skim through the copy (they certainly will) they can still see the most important features and benefits of your product.
I suggest you take a look at some of the successful landing pages on cb to have an idea about what works. Instead of trying to talk about everything, you should keep it simple, clean and straight to the point. It's already hard to go through a long sales page and you are making it more difficult for the visitor. You could take some of the text out and it would still say the same thing.
When they ask you about a movie, you don't describe it scene by scene. You just tell the main story. You simplify it and get rid of the unnecessary details, right? That's what you should do. Also do not be afraid of using bold letters and highlighting. This way, when your visitors skim through the copy (they certainly will) they can still see the most important features and benefits of your product.
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