Seven different headlines for making money online...

HeMan1320 said:

Lazy Profit Secrets: How to Gain Free Traffic and Turn Followers into Earnings

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Thank you for choosing this headline. It also seems to me that
the word LAZY plays a certain role in headlines

I would immediately think "yea right, this is complete bs" with these headlines.

They're all too long imo and maybe it would work on some audience but for most audiences it's crap.

Honestly reading them feels like waste of time and so I would feel like someone is trying to waste my time just reading them. I would close the message / tab / page immediately.

They're complicated, use advanced vocabulary and all that stuff.

Here my proposition:

$1777 / mo IG at 567% ROI in 2 hours a day (Guide)

Now, it's clear what the benefit is and what are the inputs and outputs.

Where are benefits in your headlines? Where is some USP? I think these were written by someone who hasn't taken elementary classes of marketing yet.

My proposition doesn't have to be good but before judging I would test variations. A/b test is basic of making any conclusions.

BlackStar81 said:

Thank you for choosing this headline. It also seems to me that
the word LAZY plays a certain role in headlines

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No, more like free but to each their own.

Also numbers and also bullshit...

Overall depends on the audience.

But for general audience they're not useful.