Seven different headlines for making money online...

[BlackStar81]

Lazy Profit Secrets: How to Gain Free Traffic and Turn Followers into Earnings

Thank you for choosing this headline. It also seems to me that
the word LAZY plays a certain role in headlines

 

[Deadlight]

I would immediately think "yea right, this is complete bs" with these headlines.

 

[OccultKingdoms]

They're all too long imo and maybe it would work on some audience but for most audiences it's crap.

Honestly reading them feels like waste of time and so I would feel like someone is trying to waste my time just reading them. I would close the message / tab / page immediately.

They're complicated, use advanced vocabulary and all that stuff.

Here my proposition:

$1777 / mo IG at 567% ROI in 2 hours a day (Guide)

Now, it's clear what the benefit is and what are the inputs and outputs.

Where are benefits in your headlines? Where is some USP? I think these were written by someone who hasn't taken elementary classes of marketing yet.

My proposition doesn't have to be good but before judging I would test variations. A/b test is basic of making any conclusions.

 

[OccultKingdoms]

Thank you for choosing this headline. It also seems to me that
the word LAZY plays a certain role in headlines

No, more like free but to each their own.

Also numbers and also bullshit...

Overall depends on the audience.

But for general audience they're not useful.