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You do not have enough content on this blog in my opinion. Some content ideas would be articles about the types of technology that you offer(use your keywords). If you are trying to build an authority site try to add more content. Also if you are depending on this to be your money site I would absolutely never share it on this forum. Good Luck.
 
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Check out The Spelling bro ... its " DEVELOPMENT " and not "devlopement"

http://gyazo.com/d97b93b1c98b5d2d992049ca45ec274c

Although this is your First blog yet I would suggest that you should have done a little more research prior proceeding ..
This too me looks more like a spammy web 2.0 blog posting done by some random guy ..You blog need to be attractive ...
Focus on = >1) Catchy Titles and sub headings 3) Design/Theme 2) Pictures
I mean think why would someone spend some time reading a dull blog unless you convince the person that yes your blog is good anf illed up with interesting stuffs than only he/she will spend time reading this and for that your Blog should be soothing to the viewers' eyes.
From SEO point of view .. On page factor is very poor but as this is your first blog I wont comment anything further about it. Neither about the page loading time as it is sub-domain so it can be a little sluggish.
You can try for content writing but Blogging is a rather different concept atleast as much I know ..

Bottomline for newbie bloggers, I guess WordPress is a better platform ..
You get a lot of freedom to express you creativity with Wordpress easily as compared to Google Sites and Blogger.
Plus with the free plugins you get a boost from SEO point of view as well.

I will suggest you to explore more and more and wish you all the best !! ..
 
shadowcat said:
Check out The Spelling bro ... its " DEVELOPMENT " and not "devlopement"

http://gyazo.com/d97b93b1c98b5d2d992049ca45ec274c

Although this is your First blog yet I would suggest that you should have done a little more research prior proceeding ..
This too me looks more like a spammy web 2.0 blog posting done by some random guy ..You blog need to be attractive ...
Focus on = >1) Catchy Titles and sub headings 3) Design/Theme 2) Pictures
I mean think why would someone spend some time reading a dull blog unless you convince the person that yes your blog is good anf illed up with interesting stuffs than only he/she will spend time reading this and for that your Blog should be soothing to the viewers' eyes.
From SEO point of view .. On page factor is very poor but as this is your first blog I wont comment anything further about it. Neither about the page loading time as it is sub-domain so it can be a little sluggish.
You can try for content writing but Blogging is a rather different concept atleast as much I know ..

Bottomline for newbie bloggers, I guess WordPress is a better platform ..
You get a lot of freedom to express you creativity with Wordpress easily as compared to Google Sites and Blogger.
Plus with the free plugins you get a boost from SEO point of view as well.

I will suggest you to explore more and more and wish you all the best !! ..
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Your aspiring words inspires me alot i will be posting blogs which will fulfill your expectation
 
I want to throw in another vote for Wordpress too. The blog (for a beginner) is okay, but it lacks personality and content. It's a good start to help teach you how to work a blog, but I don't think your current design as a promotion tool for your business is going to do you any good. Update the theme and make it easy to learn about your business and how you can help your clients, without that clumsy blog look.

Get a professional domain as well. You want to impress any potential client that visits your site, passing out a .blogspot isn't really suggested.
 
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No Relevant Theme - Fail
Meta Description - Fail
Page Rank Flow - Fail
Home Page Title - Fail
Loading time > 8 sec - Fail

I'd suggest you to drive as much traffic as you can, but if you do not fix the list i pointed out person will never come back again.
 
Guess a lot needs to be done here to make it look like a blogging site. A better domain name would have worked and this is too simple to attract visitors.Moreover, all the content is just talking about your services, blog needs to be informative for the reader and not spreading words about your brand (that's what I believe) :rolleyes:.
 
You need a domain, as repeated a billion times. Also, install wordpress and get the plugin meta-tags for SEO. Create as much posts as possible. Get a logo. The thing about blogs is that there is always room for improvement.
 
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