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Pretty weird video sequence and an annoying sound coming from the printer at 0:29. Dunno if that's a kind of video that's clear to target audience. It wasn't clear from the start for me. Also, I found the narrator's voice too mechanic.
 
randybishop said:
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Yep it's really strange and the robot voice is really creepy

0:28 what is the rasta guy doing ? Looks like he has some sort of nervous tics cuz he forgot to blaze the herb today.
 
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Good for comparison. Overall, it is unique video but don't you think quality of video could more better??
 
I think you have good technical skill and have the potential to make a Killer Video but you need to work on your Story. You have to 'Tell a Story' that connects with who your audience wants to become.
 
Its all about tellinga story just like Eforio said. People will buy anything from you if you have a cool brand with a story.
 
This is a good video, but I think you need to build your technique a bit, and build your skills. The video was not fully clear as what you were trying to get across at first. once you went through It was understandable.
 
The message is not clear from the start and I lost attention so thats not good maybe improve a bit?
 
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