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Please review this Video

Discussion in 'Video Production' started by bloggersjoy, Apr 6, 2015.

  1. bloggersjoy

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    Not bad..looks pretty good..
     
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    Strange................
     
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    Pretty weird video sequence and an annoying sound coming from the printer at 0:29. Dunno if that's a kind of video that's clear to target audience. It wasn't clear from the start for me. Also, I found the narrator's voice too mechanic.
     
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    Yep it's really strange and the robot voice is really creepy

    0:28 what is the rasta guy doing ? Looks like he has some sort of nervous tics cuz he forgot to blaze the herb today.
     
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    Good for comparison. Overall, it is unique video but don't you think quality of video could more better??
     
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    good continuation broth
     
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    I think you have good technical skill and have the potential to make a Killer Video but you need to work on your Story. You have to 'Tell a Story' that connects with who your audience wants to become.
     
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    Its all about tellinga story just like Eforio said. People will buy anything from you if you have a cool brand with a story.
     
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    This is a good video, but I think you need to build your technique a bit, and build your skills. The video was not fully clear as what you were trying to get across at first. once you went through It was understandable.
     
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    The message is not clear from the start and I lost attention so thats not good maybe improve a bit?
     
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    hp is more better than brother.