Please Review This Sales Page..

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MarkKB

Newbie

Aug 9, 2012

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• Aug 17, 2012

• #1

Hi

Pls share your thoughts on my sales page - most comments are welcome..

hXXp://bit.ly/PiXErH

Replace XX w tt

Thanks

Note: this is only a DEMO version

anything to improve?

 

ferma231

Elite Member

Jul 14, 2011

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• Aug 17, 2012

• #2

Wow, its amazing

But on right side there is but now today

Why is that? and what are people going to buy ?
Im not expert , but it seems that that dont fit there

ANd also there is to much buttons : Add to cart

It just seems that you are struggling to sell something and you are selling to people, you need to help them with their problems , not to sell something

 

puneetas3

Senior Member

Jan 8, 2012

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• Aug 17, 2012

• #3

Man if I have been into this niche, I would just save that image for me. You should put some signs on it to avoid copying (as in royalty free image sites put on their images). Nice work.

 

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Mulala

Newbie

Dec 11, 2010

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• Aug 17, 2012

• #4

Very nice landing page!

I also think you should limit the buy now buttons to the first one and the last one. And I'm also interested; what exactly are people buying?

 

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Hartwigm

Junior Member

Mar 7, 2012

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• Aug 21, 2012

• #5

Pretty good, I''m personally not a fan of long sales pages but for what it is, it's very well done.

 

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digitaldesignz

Newbie

Aug 17, 2012

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• Aug 21, 2012

• #6

your landing page is awesome man, i think that this will convert well

 

blackfairy

Regular Member

Sep 5, 2010

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• Aug 21, 2012

• #7

It looks really nice and professional, but in my opinion it's too long. Everyone is in a rush nowadays and most customers don't want to read much.

 

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ScripterAlex

Registered Member

Aug 8, 2011

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• Aug 21, 2012

• #8

Too many buy points in the funnel. You should have an absolute maximum of 2 and make sure you use the belcher button for both of them. This has been proven time and again.