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Please Review This Sales Page..

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by MarkKB, Aug 17, 2012.

  1. MarkKB

    MarkKB Newbie

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    Hi

    Pls share your thoughts on my sales page - most comments are welcome..

    hXXp://bit.ly/PiXErH

    Replace XX w tt

    Thanks

    Note: this is only a DEMO version

    anything to improve?
     
  2. ferma231

    ferma231 Elite Member

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    Wow, its amazing :)

    But on right side there is but now today

    Why is that? and what are people going to buy ?
    Im not expert , but it seems that that dont fit there

    ANd also there is to much buttons : Add to cart

    It just seems that you are struggling to sell something and you are selling to people, you need to help them with their problems , not to sell something
     
  3. puneetas3

    puneetas3 Senior Member

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    Man if I have been into this niche, I would just save that image for me. You should put some signs on it to avoid copying (as in royalty free image sites put on their images). Nice work.
     
  4. Mulala

    Mulala Newbie

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    Very nice landing page!

    I also think you should limit the buy now buttons to the first one and the last one. And I'm also interested; what exactly are people buying?
     
  5. Hartwigm

    Hartwigm Junior Member

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    Pretty good, I''m personally not a fan of long sales pages but for what it is, it's very well done.
     
  6. digitaldesignz

    digitaldesignz Newbie

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    your landing page is awesome man, i think that this will convert well
     
  7. blackfairy

    blackfairy Regular Member

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    It looks really nice and professional, but in my opinion it's too long. Everyone is in a rush nowadays and most customers don't want to read much.
     
  8. ScripterAlex

    ScripterAlex Registered Member

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    Too many buy points in the funnel. You should have an absolute maximum of 2 and make sure you use the belcher button for both of them. This has been proven time and again.