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Please review my squeeze page

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by Noiro, Jul 4, 2012.

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  1. Noiro

    Noiro Newbie

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    I have recently decided to build a list so I created a squeeze page. However, I'm not sure if it will convert well so I don't want to buy any solo ads yet.

    I would greatly appreciate if you would check my squeeze page out and tell me what you think of it! Don't sign-up, I just want to know if it's good enough or whether I should improve anything.

    Though I can't post links yet, so maybe anyone could pm me so I could send you the link to my site?

    Thanks!
     
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  3. Noiro

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    No nothing like that! I'm just beginning to build a squeeze page and would like to get some critique.
     
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    You can do it by yourself anyway .

    Just imagine yourself as other people who goes to your page, if you would be he , would you enter email ?
     
  5. Noiro

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    Well, to me it looks quite good but I'm new to internet marketing so I'm not sure what works and what not. Thinking of buying some solo ads but I don't want my money go to waste if my conversion would be like 1-2%... So I would be glad if anyone could review my site and tell me if it could convert well or not.
     
  6. Noiro

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    So could anyone help me out?
     
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    Sure I'll take a look.
     
  8. theAngle

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    You can paste the link on the thread and to make it visible, just select it and press unlink button(from the thread editor) then it will look like a normal phrase. Even not clickable but people will be able to see the address and access it. By copying and pasting into the browser's address bar.
     
  9. Noiro

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    Thanks for the tip, theAngle!

    Here's my squeeze page: your-online-profits.com

    Please give me some feedback on what could be improved on my site.
     
  10. theAngle

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    For me you page has less impact. It doesn't show much appealing material, it doesn't have a video, an audio, and not even some catchy images, banners or any sort of ads.

    You have to improve it in order to make people signing up for your mailing list.

    There are lots of examples on the net that can inspire you.
     
  11. Noiro

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    Thanks for your feedback. Should I change the headline and bullet points? Maybe you could tell what conversions I could expect from this site?
     
  12. theAngle

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    I'm not an expert in this field (site conversions), but for what I've seen your site won't convert much cuz it's lacking eye caching stuff. Exploit the media, just one of them is enough -- or audio or video.

    If you can't produce some media for now, then improve with banner ads, images to illustrate what you want.

    Take a look at what I'm talking about: http://startbydoing.com/squeeze-page-examples-and-tips/
     
  13. Noiro

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    Ok, I changed my squeeze page drastically. I think it's a little more eye-catching. Here's the link again: your-online-profits.com
    Tell me what you guys think!
     
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    I think is quite good. It is very simple and to the point. Just one call to action statement. No distractions.

    Obviously, as quite experienced person in IM I would not sign up to this site, but I am sure I am not in your target group anyway :). For newbies, it's a very good squeeze page from my point of view.
     
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    I think it looks awesome! Very clean yet obvious...what did u use to generate the squeeze page? If u dont mind me asking...
     
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    I've always been on the lookout for new products and interesting stuff... But no, your squeeze page doesn't really give enough information. ChecktheAngle's link. Those are nice sites and I'd probably sign up. So, maybe instead of just a page install wordpress and a simple theme. You'll want to give a little more info about your product. A lot of mystery would make most surfers just move on.

    Also, the title of your page is "PUT YOUR TITLE INFO HERE". ;) Might want to change that when you go live.
     
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  17. Noiro

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    tlommy, thank you! I created it with KompoZer.
    Kikerinka, thanks for your feedback! Yeah, I'm mostly targeting people who are new in internet marketing.
    magomago, I'm having a hard time creating a nice, attractive page that would not have too much boring text and bullet points in it... But I guess I should try providing a little more info. Thanks for your opinion! :)
     
  18. Noiro

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    Also, do you think it's worthing buying some solo ads for my squeeze page? Or are there better ways to get optins?
     
  19. T3chnician

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    I think its fine! I have been into IM for well over a year, and into mods / cracking for even longer, I didnt notice half the errors on ur page! I think most people who are looking for specific information wont notice either (most people are in a hurry to find the answers to what there looking for online)
     
  20. Noiro

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    That's good to know! Thanks