Please Help Me With My Sales Page

hyperlite

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Nov 24, 2008

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• Sep 10, 2009

• #1

Sup dudes,

I just launched my first product and sales page and was hoping to get some suggestions on how to improve it. Any help would be much appreciated.

The affiliate page is at the bottom. Feel free to tear that to shreds as well.

The Scar Solution <--- Get this

 

Last edited: Sep 10, 2009

mrunknown

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• Sep 10, 2009

• #2

you didnt put a link bud

 

secretboy08

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• Sep 10, 2009

• #3

lol.atleast include the url in the post.

 

hyperlite

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• Sep 10, 2009
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• #4

Shit!!

Hahahah, ok it's up now.

The Scar Solution is the name of the product.

 

hyperlite

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• #5

Nothing? Guess it must be perfect.

 

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DebbieSprules

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• Sep 12, 2009

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I'd loose the green, move the before after much higher, have more examples, shorten the text and make it incrementally greater as the page goes along, as more questions.. can i be honest? Its clean but looks a bit cheap... if you are selling something like this it needs to have an exclusive look.... see the images for example for the book The secret... that is how to package an idea and make it wanted.