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Please Help Me With My Sales Page

Discussion in 'Affiliate Programs' started by hyperlite, Sep 10, 2009.

  1. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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    Sup dudes,

    I just launched my first product and sales page and was hoping to get some suggestions on how to improve it. Any help would be much appreciated.

    The affiliate page is at the bottom. Feel free to tear that to shreds as well.

    The Scar Solution <--- Get this
     
    Last edited: Sep 10, 2009
  2. mrunknown

    mrunknown Regular Member

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    you didnt put a link bud
     
  3. secretboy08

    secretboy08 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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  4. hyperlite

    hyperlite Regular Member

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  5. hyperlite

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    Nothing? Guess it must be perfect. :D
     
  6. DebbieSprules

    DebbieSprules Senior Member

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    I'd loose the green, move the before after much higher, have more examples, shorten the text and make it incrementally greater as the page goes along, as more questions.. can i be honest? Its clean but looks a bit cheap... if you are selling something like this it needs to have an exclusive look.... see the images for example for the book The secret... that is how to package an idea and make it wanted.