Please criticize my website...

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agag2

Supreme Member

Feb 17, 2009

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #1

Hi
I spent some time building this website and I want some "input" from you guys how could I improve it ?

Site= G0rd0niiH00dia.inf0 ---> replace the zero's (0) with o's (o)

tell me about

1)the theme

2)the quality of content

3)keyword density

4)linking between pages

5)anything else u thinks needs improvment

say what u like I don't mind (as long as it's helpful!!)
thanks
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Whutface

Newbie

Apr 17, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #2

All the crap at the top looks like shit

 

ssellers

Regular Member

May 10, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #3

Whutface said:

All the crap at the top looks like shit

Click to expand...

Agree 100% - Take out all those damn links at the tops and drop the header down a little to free up the social media icons. Drop them down if you want, either way, just so they are not overlapping the header.

Also, arrange the ads on the sidebar a little cleaner.


Other than that, it has potential.

 

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flubber134

Regular Member

Jan 9, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #4

yes, too much links on the top.
The rest are good. The ads on the side bar look pretty attractive

 

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BiggDipper

Registered Member

Mar 5, 2009

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #5

Remove the pages from the navigation you can get a plugin

http://wordpress.org/extend/plugins/exclude-pages/

Click to expand...

Extra Characters at the top of the screen

Code:

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the ads don't even fit in the sidebar. sorrybud but this site needs a lot of work have fun

 

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Jurdan

Registered Member

Mar 1, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #6

I cant view the page... can you just post the link instead. I would be much easier for us. -_________________________________________________-

 

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lninja

Newbie

Apr 7, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #7

G0rd0niiH00dia.inf0 - link is broken

 

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bloggerdon

Registered Member

Feb 14, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #8

The post structures need to be fixed up i.e. paragraphed properly. And your tag box is empty, so make sure your posts are being tagged properly. And yeah like everyone else said, too many links in that header. Simplicity is best. You want visitors to look at your content first with attractive headers, then they read the content and next to or embedded in the content you have related and attractive ads that solve the problem you discuss in the posts.

 

ultimategamechain

Power Member

Apr 22, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #9

if your serious with your site you should have used a .com domain.

 

NotTheDude

Regular Member

Nov 12, 2009

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #10

WAY too sales-y - it appears to be screaming "CLICK MY LINK..." I am selling you something..."

Just find a similar weight loss blog(not CPA spam) and model your site after it, with a "few" cleverly placed links to your offer.

 

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winbiz

Newbie

Jan 16, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #11

Ok, first, important 2 things you have to do now :

1. It's ok if you create many pages, but NOT all listed on your header.
Try to create their parent pages, ie :

- Parent : Hoodia Product
Child : ProductType 1, ProductType 2, etc
- Parent : Hoodia Supplement
Child : Supplement1, Supplement2, etc

If you create parent pages, a drop down child pages list will show when you hover your mouse to parent page link, try it.

2. My guess is you don't understand purpose between post and page yet

See their difference here :


hxxp://en.support.wordpress.com/post-vs-page/

(change x to t)

That's what I think you should do before modified anything else.

Oh 1 more thing, try to make "a breath" at your post by separate the paragraph with space, example :

Bad paragraph:
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss
ssssssssss


Good Paragraph:
ssssssssss
ssssssssss

ssssssssss
ssssssssss

ssssssssss
ssssssssss

Let us know if you have modified your site and we will criticize it again, lol

 

bizroot

Supreme Member

Feb 25, 2008

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #12

Unable to open your site... seems link broken or server down... tried several times with no result...

 

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howcanvn

BANNED

Jan 13, 2010

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• Jun 24, 2010

• #13

Your site seem to be ok . But i think u need move all the links on top to below your post .

 

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agag2

Supreme Member

Feb 17, 2009

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• Jun 24, 2010
• Thread Starter Thread Starter

• #14

howcanvn said:

Your site seem to be ok . But i think u need move all the links on top to below your post .

Click to expand...

Thanks- I'm not sure how to remove is it wordpress or plugin?
Thanks for ur suggestions guys
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summertime1

Junior Member

Jun 11, 2010

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• Jun 25, 2010

• #15

- The ads in your sidebar mostly don't fit in the boxes surrounding them
- The design is.. ugly 0o too dark, too much "corners" - it's Web 2.0 dude
- I can't see any clear navigation structure.. if this is NOT only a one-landing-page-website you should think of some sort of presenting a useful navigation

 

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Movie

Newbie

Sep 23, 2009

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• Jun 25, 2010

• #16

thats crap
try to let look it more professional
you will not earn a dime with this

 

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FrancoLPM

Newbie

Jan 12, 2010

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• Jun 25, 2010

• #17

change header man, urgently, its no friendly for the eyes.
Like the shares in the top-right. change the borders of the divs container...
A lot of work to do man, start now!

 

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pratz007

Newbie

May 13, 2010

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• Jun 29, 2010

• #18

Pardon me but i cannot find the link to create a new thread.

I want you all to Criticize my website. valuablestones dot com
It has a PR of 4 but very low CTR. Tired of promoting it.. please advise