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Please criticize my website...

Discussion in 'White Hat SEO' started by agag2, Jun 24, 2010.

  1. agag2

    agag2 Supreme Member

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    Hi
    I spent some time building this website and I want some "input" from you guys how could I improve it ?

    Site= G0rd0niiH00dia.inf0 ---> replace the zero's (0) with o's (o)

    tell me about

    1)the theme

    2)the quality of content

    3)keyword density

    4)linking between pages

    5)anything else u thinks needs improvment

    say what u like I don't mind (as long as it's helpful!!)
    thanks
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  2. Whutface

    Whutface Newbie

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    All the crap at the top looks like shit
     
  3. ssellers

    ssellers Regular Member

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    Agree 100% - Take out all those damn links at the tops and drop the header down a little to free up the social media icons. Drop them down if you want, either way, just so they are not overlapping the header.

    Also, arrange the ads on the sidebar a little cleaner.


    Other than that, it has potential.
     
  4. flubber134

    flubber134 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    yes, too much links on the top.
    The rest are good. The ads on the side bar look pretty attractive :D
     
  5. BiggDipper

    BiggDipper Registered Member

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    Remove the pages from the navigation you can get a plugin
    Extra Characters at the top of the screen
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    the ads don't even fit in the sidebar. sorrybud but this site needs a lot of work have fun
     
  6. Jurdan

    Jurdan Registered Member

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    I cant view the page... can you just post the link instead. I would be much easier for us. -_________________________________________________-
     
  7. lninja

    lninja Newbie

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    G0rd0niiH00dia.inf0 - link is broken
     
  8. bloggerdon

    bloggerdon Registered Member

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    The post structures need to be fixed up i.e. paragraphed properly. And your tag box is empty, so make sure your posts are being tagged properly. And yeah like everyone else said, too many links in that header. Simplicity is best. You want visitors to look at your content first with attractive headers, then they read the content and next to or embedded in the content you have related and attractive ads that solve the problem you discuss in the posts.
     
  9. ultimategamechain

    ultimategamechain Power Member

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    if your serious with your site you should have used a .com domain.
     
  10. NotTheDude

    NotTheDude Regular Member

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    WAY too sales-y - it appears to be screaming "CLICK MY LINK..." I am selling you something..."

    Just find a similar weight loss blog(not CPA spam) and model your site after it, with a "few" cleverly placed links to your offer.
     
  11. winbiz

    winbiz Newbie

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    Ok, first, important 2 things you have to do now :

    1. It's ok if you create many pages, but NOT all listed on your header.
    Try to create their parent pages, ie :

    - Parent : Hoodia Product
    Child : ProductType 1, ProductType 2, etc
    - Parent : Hoodia Supplement
    Child : Supplement1, Supplement2, etc

    If you create parent pages, a drop down child pages list will show when you hover your mouse to parent page link, try it.

    2. My guess is you don't understand purpose between post and page yet

    See their difference here :


    hxxp://en.support.wordpress.com/post-vs-page/

    (change x to t)

    That's what I think you should do before modified anything else.

    Oh 1 more thing, try to make "a breath" at your post by separate the paragraph with space, example :

    Bad paragraph:
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss


    Good Paragraph:
    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss

    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss

    ssssssssss
    ssssssssss

    Let us know if you have modified your site and we will criticize it again, lol
     
  12. bizroot

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    Unable to open your site... seems link broken or server down... tried several times with no result...
     
  13. howcanvn

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    Your site seem to be ok . But i think u need move all the links on top to below your post .
     
  14. agag2

    agag2 Supreme Member

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    Thanks- I'm not sure how to remove is it wordpress or plugin?
    Thanks for ur suggestions guys
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  15. summertime1

    summertime1 Junior Member

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    - The ads in your sidebar mostly don't fit in the boxes surrounding them
    - The design is.. ugly 0o too dark, too much "corners" - it's Web 2.0 dude ;)
    - I can't see any clear navigation structure.. if this is NOT only a one-landing-page-website you should think of some sort of presenting a useful navigation
     
  16. Movie

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    thats crap
    try to let look it more professional
    you will not earn a dime with this
     
  17. FrancoLPM

    FrancoLPM Newbie

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    change header man, urgently, its no friendly for the eyes.
    Like the shares in the top-right. change the borders of the divs container...
    A lot of work to do man, start now!
     
  18. pratz007

    pratz007 Newbie

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    Pardon me but i cannot find the link to create a new thread.

    I want you all to Criticize my website. valuablestones dot com
    It has a PR of 4 but very low CTR. Tired of promoting it.. please advise