Personalized Cold Emails At Scale - Opinion Needed

Forget clever copy, you're right, need trumps want. Maybe target industries facing constant regulatory changes – compliance is always a pain point they'll pay to solve. What about the legal or healthcare sectors?
 
No I did not use those. I have a code that my developers put together but its mostly no-code. It's using a bunch of different AI tools stacked on top of one another. It's pretty amazing (to me at least).


Reply rate is not good.

50% of my emails get unopened and our deliverability is only 50%. To me that is bad but I asked a group and they said this is good/decent.

Subj line: Quick Question, Company name, Hi First Name, Thoughts First Name?

Tested all of these out

50% Delivery Rate is not that Good

Check Bounce Rate?

Is your List fresh and verified?
 
Within the payday loan industry - we send about 100,000 emails a day but conversion is quite low. Have you attempted the industry? Willing to shoot the shit and see what sticks.

is this volume cold mailing or to list subscribers?
 
Hi everyone,

After spending about 90 days figuring things out and getting burned by numerous "developers", last year I finally finished an amazing tool that stacks AI on top of AI be able to generate personalized cold emails at scale.

I used Clay in the past but it was super expensive for what I needed (volume) so this forced me to develop my own.

The result? I am now able to enter thousands of leads from Apollo/Instantly into a google sheet and have it scrape the leads website and make the emails sound like a human wrote it.

I have 2 clients in the finance industry that lend money to other businesses but no matter how hard you try, the business either needs money or they don't.

We charge by the number of appointments we're able to generate. The numbers aren't impressive but I don't think it's the tool's fault.

Here's my question: I am looking for a "starving crowd" as Hormozi puts it. This is who GPT thinks I should be targeting with this tool:


1️⃣ B2B Sales Agencies & SDR Teams (Outsourced Sales)

2️⃣ Business Loan Brokers & Alternative Lenders

3️⃣ Recruiting & Headhunting Firms

4️⃣ M&A Firms & Business Brokers

5️⃣ High-Ticket Consulting & Coaching Programs ($5K-$100K Offers)

6️⃣ Agencies Selling High-Ticket B2B Services (SEO, PPC, Web Dev, Branding)

My 2 clients are in the finance side of lending money as mentioned and I don't think more clever copy would make someone want to borrow huge sums of money.

Any other ideas? I was also thinking of licensing it out for say $1k/month + they pay all others fees associated with it.

If you have any ideas on this, would love to hear it!

DD
Please let me know the all inclusive rate for say 2000 leads in a month.
 
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