Need some advice please new Gaming PC ebook

mrmidjam

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Sep 17, 2008

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• Dec 1, 2009

• #1

I guys,

I have created a build your own gaming pc ebook and need some criticism on my first ever squeeze page, please be gentle

I haven't yet added it to clickbank as i'm a little short on cash at the moment with crimbo on the way and two demanding daughters but, i have added to payloadz.

Any advice would be great!

http://www.budgetgamingpc.com

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Last edited: Dec 1, 2009

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theWombat

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• Dec 2, 2009

• #2

call to action sooner.. i got bored halfway down

 

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Total Noob

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• Dec 2, 2009

• #3

I must be insane at the bottom looks newbie

 

mrmidjam

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• Dec 2, 2009
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• #4

Thx guys have adjusted my site

 

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srhcom

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• Dec 19, 2009

• #5

Hey, there is a thread at slickdeals where all the users keep a wiki of the best budget parts and prices.

http://slickdeals.net/forums/showthread.php?sduid=0&t=553826

 

mrmidjam

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• Dec 19, 2009
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• #6

ok?????