Need some advice please new Gaming PC ebook

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  1. mrmidjam

    mrmidjam Regular Member

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    I guys,

    I have created a build your own gaming pc ebook and need some criticism on my first ever squeeze page, please be gentle :)

    I haven't yet added it to clickbank as i'm a little short on cash at the moment with crimbo on the way and two demanding daughters but, i have added to payloadz.

    Any advice would be great!

     
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    call to action sooner.. i got bored halfway down
     
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    I must be insane at the bottom looks newbie
     
  4. mrmidjam

    mrmidjam Regular Member

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    Thx guys have adjusted my site :)
     
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    ok?????