Need Proof-Reading Done

Webbers UX · Aug 28, 2011

I need Proof-Reading to a site text, it currently does not look professional and fluent, so I need someone from the US / CA / UK to proof-read it, make it more professional.

site:http://sespy.net

There are about 600 words , and it would be great if you could add some kind of text etc to make it look more of a landing page style text.

Let me know your price

and earlier work would be great!

Luka

mysticdog · Aug 28, 2011

Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

http://pregnancymanual.com/

Webbers UX · Aug 28, 2011

Thanks for your submission, I'm looking for more entries.

scottx1995 · Aug 28, 2011

mysticdog said:
Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

http://pregnancymanual.com/

sorry to jump in on this LukaB

but mysticdog

did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
Erik Creed.
atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.

Webbers UX · Aug 28, 2011

scottx1995 said:
sorry to jump in on this LukaB

but mysticdog

did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
Erik Creed.
atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.

OH that's Eriks site?

I found a gut to do the proof readign etc, thank

scottx1995 · Aug 28, 2011

mysticdog said:
Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

http://pregnancymanual.com/

LukaB said:
OH that's Eriks site?

I found a gut to do the proof readign etc, thank

yup thats his

Tukru · Aug 29, 2011

pm me if you hav'nt sorted it yet

mysticdog · Sep 6, 2011

Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Yes, Erik Creed paid me after almost a month I think. And he sent the payment through Western Union because he's having a problem using his card in PayPal. But yes, he did pay up. I think he's just really having problems.

mysticdog · Sep 6, 2011

Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Yes, Erik Creed paid me after almost a month I think. And he sent the payment through Western Union because he's having a problem using his card in PayPal. But yes, he did pay up. I think he's just really having problems.

scottx1995 said:
sorry to jump in on this LukaB

but mysticdog

did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
Erik Creed.
atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.

shiBlack · Sep 7, 2011

Hey LukaB, if you still are looking for someone to help with your ad's copy, I'm a native English speaker from the US.

I don't have any examples for this sort of thing, but I will do it for dirt cheap so I can use it as an example in the future.

Here's an example of how I would rewrite your headline:

Earn Hundreds Of Dollars For Every Click Of The "Start" Button.

It may sound like an exaggeration, but I assure you it's not. Every time you click the "Start" button, Search Engine Spy's unique, trade-secreted algorithm delivers real time data on the value of your keywords. In the past this data was less complete and took hours of work by a skilled person. Now you can get this valuable data with the simple click of a mouse.

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