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Need Proof-Reading Done

Discussion in 'Hire a Freelancer' started by LukaB, Aug 28, 2011.

  1. LukaB

    LukaB Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    I need Proof-Reading to a site text, it currently does not look professional and fluent, so I need someone from the US / CA / UK to proof-read it, make it more professional.


    site:http://sespy.net

    There are about 600 words , and it would be great if you could add some kind of text etc to make it look more of a landing page style text.

    Let me know your price ;) and earlier work would be great!


    Luka
     
  2. mysticdog

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    Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

    http://pregnancymanual.com/
     
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  3. LukaB

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    Thanks for your submission, I'm looking for more entries.
     
  4. scottx1995

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    sorry to jump in on this LukaB

    but mysticdog

    did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
    this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
    Erik Creed.
    atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.
     
  5. LukaB

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    OH that's Eriks site?



    I found a gut to do the proof readign etc, thank
     
  6. scottx1995

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    yup thats his
     
  7. Tukru

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    pm me if you hav'nt sorted it yet
     
  8. mysticdog

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    Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Yes, Erik Creed paid me after almost a month I think. And he sent the payment through Western Union because he's having a problem using his card in PayPal. But yes, he did pay up. I think he's just really having problems.
     
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    Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Yes, Erik Creed paid me after almost a month I think. And he sent the payment through Western Union because he's having a problem using his card in PayPal. But yes, he did pay up. I think he's just really having problems.

     
  10. shiBlack

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    Hey LukaB, if you still are looking for someone to help with your ad's copy, I'm a native English speaker from the US.

    I don't have any examples for this sort of thing, but I will do it for dirt cheap so I can use it as an example in the future.

    Here's an example of how I would rewrite your headline:

    Earn Hundreds Of Dollars For Every Click Of The "Start" Button.

    It may sound like an exaggeration, but I assure you it's not. Every time you click the "Start" button, Search Engine Spy's unique, trade-secreted algorithm delivers real time data on the value of your keywords. In the past this data was less complete and took hours of work by a skilled person. Now you can get this valuable data with the simple click of a mouse.