Need Proof-Reading Done

[Webbers UX]

I need Proof-Reading to a site text, it currently does not look professional and fluent, so I need someone from the US / CA / UK to proof-read it, make it more professional.


site:http://sespy.net

There are about 600 words , and it would be great if you could add some kind of text etc to make it look more of a landing page style text.

Let me know your price and earlier work would be great!


Luka

 

[mysticdog]

Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

http://pregnancymanual.com/

 

[Webbers UX]

Thanks for your submission, I'm looking for more entries.

 

[scottx1995]

Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

http://pregnancymanual.com/

sorry to jump in on this LukaB

but mysticdog

did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
Erik Creed.
atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.

 

[Webbers UX]

sorry to jump in on this LukaB

but mysticdog

did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
Erik Creed.
atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.

OH that's Eriks site?



I found a gut to do the proof readign etc, thank

 

[scottx1995]

Here's one sales page that I've written and edited.

http://pregnancymanual.com/

OH that's Eriks site?



I found a gut to do the proof readign etc, thank

yup thats his

 

[Tukru]

pm me if you hav'nt sorted it yet

 

[mysticdog]

Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Yes, Erik Creed paid me after almost a month I think. And he sent the payment through Western Union because he's having a problem using his card in PayPal. But yes, he did pay up. I think he's just really having problems.

 

[mysticdog]

Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Yes, Erik Creed paid me after almost a month I think. And he sent the payment through Western Union because he's having a problem using his card in PayPal. But yes, he did pay up. I think he's just really having problems.

sorry to jump in on this LukaB

but mysticdog

did this guy pay you ? and do you mind lettin us know when this work was done ?
this is the site of the guy who scammed a lot of our money and disappeared
Erik Creed.
atlaest in his earlier PM s he did mention this site as being his.

 

[shiBlack]

Hey LukaB, if you still are looking for someone to help with your ad's copy, I'm a native English speaker from the US.

I don't have any examples for this sort of thing, but I will do it for dirt cheap so I can use it as an example in the future.

Here's an example of how I would rewrite your headline:

Earn Hundreds Of Dollars For Every Click Of The "Start" Button.

It may sound like an exaggeration, but I assure you it's not. Every time you click the "Start" button, Search Engine Spy's unique, trade-secreted algorithm delivers real time data on the value of your keywords. In the past this data was less complete and took hours of work by a skilled person. Now you can get this valuable data with the simple click of a mouse.