TheDemne
Regular Member
- Jan 31, 2017
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Hey guys,
First of all: I am not a native speaker so I have some troubles creating a good and converting adult text.
The text is a respone to messages I receive on social media accounts. I try to monetize my respone and would like to hear some improvements. The text so far:
Hey sweetie,
I guess your horny dick could need a few sexy clips. Just join my favorite website and have some fun. I will send you the link in a moment. Click through the pages and register yourself a free account. At the end confirm your e-mail and enjoy your time there. It is all free and doesn't cost you anything.
I am waiting for you
So I would be really thankful if you could tell me if I made any mistakes or give me some tips on how to improve this text.
greetings TheDemne
First of all: I am not a native speaker so I have some troubles creating a good and converting adult text.
The text is a respone to messages I receive on social media accounts. I try to monetize my respone and would like to hear some improvements. The text so far:
Hey sweetie,
I guess your horny dick could need a few sexy clips. Just join my favorite website and have some fun. I will send you the link in a moment. Click through the pages and register yourself a free account. At the end confirm your e-mail and enjoy your time there. It is all free and doesn't cost you anything.
I am waiting for you
So I would be really thankful if you could tell me if I made any mistakes or give me some tips on how to improve this text.
greetings TheDemne