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Native English speakers, come here!

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Husbarn, Sep 15, 2014.

  1. Husbarn

    Husbarn Junior Member

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    Thanks for the help guys.

    Article is fixed now. :)
     
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  2. wizard04

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    Amm I am not a native English speaker but this part was not necessary, it really dumb

    Porsche driver has probably made a big mistake by leaving the crime scene, because when the police finds him, he's gonna be in big trouble. No information who is the causer of the collision. Maybe the Porsche driver wasn't the causer and by leaving the crime scene, now, he looks like he is the causer. Or maybe he is the causer and it's why he has run away...


    To many but and or, its speculating and not informative.
     
  3. Husbarn

    Husbarn Junior Member

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    But as not a native speaker, you think that article grammatically is correct?

    I just need an answer if it's grammatically correct or not. :) The rest is not important.
     
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    There are 3 little mistakes and the "..." in the end, they are unnecessary.
     
  5. The Scarlet Pimp

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    based on what gets posted online, i would be very surprised if anyone even notices the errors.
    :D :D :D
     
  6. Jacko6933

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    Definitely would need some serious editing, there are several mistakes, it just doesn't read well and you can see that it's not written by a native.

    And yeah, the paragraph about the Porsche driver is pretty much gibberish.

    I would never put this to any of my websites...

    Good luck!
     
  7. badaz

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    to be honest there are some serious mistakes in your article .
     
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    Obviously, cheap writing. You get what you pay for. You should hire an editor or know how to edit content before you put 3rd party writing on your site.

    If you can't pay for a real writer, though, you can't expect much more for it. He's giving you what you paid for.

    After reading this snippet, I'm pretty sure the first part is plagiarized and the last part is just total dung. He's an ESL for sure. hahahahah. Last part made me laugh.


    haha you got what you paid for though.


    I'll list the problems.

    Comma issues. Should be 5:50 not 5.50pm.

    Disjointed sentence and missing the article. Missing articles are the sign of an ESL.

    Missing article. Poor sentence.

    What area? "Urgently" is another sign of an ESL.

    lmao, yep, ESL. Quality news. This sentence made me LOL Is this guy like 13??? hahahahaha

    lmao he just fell apart here. hahaha
     
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    archon10 BANNED BANNED

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    I'm still LOLing at the last part.

    It almost looks like vandalism or the writer is a potato.